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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    ^^i just liked how the letters lay together, has a good flow for my style, and i'm a freight whore, so those low letters will be quick n easy to spray
     
  2. Captain

    Captain Senior Member

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    mother fuck does anybody post crits anymore? If you post a fucking image and you want fucking feedback, crit the people above you goddamnit. I've been without a camera for a month, posting crits and advice the whole damn time, and the one time i post an image it gets overlooked by all but amk. Jesus christ man. It's like when the year turned this board went straight to hell.
     
  3. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    sorry captain, u know i love ur shit, it just wasn't on this page and i usually don't go back and look unless i'm mega bored
     
  4. Gumdrop.Behemoth

    Gumdrop.Behemoth Senior Member

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    thank u captain took the words right out my mouth wheres sky wen you need him
     
  5. BORG

    BORG Moderator

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    captain- on the 1st piece, ur letters are movin around too much, secon one, work on the N, characters are dope
     
  6. AnteUp

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    borg...thats beautiful bro
     
  7. Dusk07

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  8. AnteUp

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    i think u shud get rid of the little drop on the side, to generic, it lukks gud but wat tha fuck do i kno about throws? lol

    p.s borg i would love to see you in tha click (closed casket) hit me up in pms
     
  9. Sou - Mvd

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  10. Nem

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    dusk, nice attempt at flow, but your structure leaves something to be desired. dumb that throw down just a little bit, try some flow again, and see what happens.

    sou, beautiful colors. and that style is sick. but it would look nicer if the letters were spread out just a tad more. only a tad though.

    borg, the arm in that one sticker looks pretty deformed, or maybe the shading doesn't really show the arms position enough. definitely keep it up with that sticker on the right though, i love it. and those are pretty original extensions. dont know if they're well placed or not, not experienced enough to say. but keep it up.

    gumdrop, the S is decent, work on it. W is pretty bad, i would suggest starting all over with it. also try a new E. and on the right leg of the R, put that extension on the other side. and cleaner lines just come with practice. sorry, but i say scrap the nokia piece. =/

    dank, dont really know what to say other than keep tweakin it. the top N is alright. just alright though.

    drak, nice curly. lol.


    first sober sketch in a while. if this is decent, i have an excuse to stop smoking. heh.

    [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/scb.jpg
     
  11. clevername

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    dusk - theres an idea there, just keep working at that throw, just keep filling page after page with em, it'll start to look better, lose the little bumps and the swoop thing for now

    gumdrop - don't worry about fills or shadow, just do simples, use bars whenever you can, everything should look like it goes together, nothing should be out of place or disproportioned

    nem - simples simples simples, use bars, keep everything the same size

    everyone else - looking dope

    I dunno I don't really think I'm good enough to critique anyone but whatever

    anyone have any help for me on the sketch I posted earlier? its a few posts up
     
  12. Nem

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    is that code for it sucks?

    and i did use bars. albeit shitty ones. but bars nonetheless.
     
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  13. SAEK

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    ai12.tinypic.com_5x5g48x.jpg

    heres another one im workin on. i messed up on the O and R
     
  14. ninja_303_763

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    THROW SOME SHINE ON THAT HOE!!lol
     
  15. silentchaos14

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  16. ScNk

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    nice foot lol
    work on evening it out bro, looks winky wonky where the I and A are connected, they seem to trail off, make all the joins look like the 'N and O' resize the top of the N and O widen em a bit, and yeh work on the K
    i should try that battle
     
  17. SAEK

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    i dont like how the middle of the N is crooked but yeh thats just me. but everything looks good other than the K but thats already covered
     
  18. d_g

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    I'm here every spare minute I got. I'm the only active mod in the toy forum at the moment because everyone else is somewhere else.

    I can't make people post pics.

    I can delete one crit posts but I'm not going to. Why? Because if I did that no one would be getting any crits at all, and sometimes they're good crits, crits that wouldn't be there if I deleted them.

    And seriously on the one crit post thing? Get off your fucking high horse mate. 90% of the posts I see from you are:

    "Blah blah blah, killing it, dope, what kind of shoes are those - bullshit chat"

    Then followed up by usually only one crit or pic so I don't delete your post.
     
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  19. KASE2

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    DEMO - that shit iz sav. stay up

    DRAKULA - it lookz good, if nething i wuld jus say get rid of the swirly thing on the "r" leg

    CLEVERNAME - I can't tell wheter ur's sez PACE or PAGE either way, i like it
     
  20. The_Sheep

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    wtf no, that aint what flow is, flow is when your letters written out together take on a nice shape and the letters compliment eachother, not that repetitive shit amk passes off as "Flow"

    Swer- Dont do that two letters in one bs, sketch each letter individually, dont do fills yet either man, work on outlines for now and no extensions either actually, just work on letters. As for the nokia piece, please color in the lines, its not that hard, and the bar thicknesses are inconsistent and dont look nice, try to have the thickness somewhat even for now, also try to use a pencil or something for your sketches, and if you do use marker use quicker steadier strokes, cause the piece doesnt look very clean

    Page- Nice nothing wrong with it really, if i had to pick something i would say the little thing on the G looks off but its barely noticable, nice man

    Cileone- Im sorry to say but those extensions are kind of crappy looking, to me extensions are supposed to be used only to add to the geometry of the piece, that shit just dont look good man, the letters are hot though, nice karaks too kinda wrinkly though

    Dusk- Its kind of bad man, im not feeling those little nipples either, and drop shadows should not overlap onto the piece, i say ditch this style as it doesnt seem to have potential

    Sou MVD- Your stuff is always original so props on that, not sure what it says but the first letter seems to overlap the second a tad too much, other than that it sexy as hell

    Nem- Nothing really wrong with it its just boring as hell and lacks flow, try and be more creative with your style

    Amore- Reminds me of Amkahs shit, looks decent though, not much to crit just get workin on some new ish

    As a general crit to all, i think peeps should stop posting their name all the time, work on some other letters anyone can make their piece flow after 1000 redos of the same tired letters, we are toys after all, we need to develop all parts of our writing