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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Socrates

    Socrates Senior Member

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    kaer?
    Peder means faggot in serbian
    and because you bitches always ask for proof, though i dont really blame you for biting. If i was a biter i would bite kaer
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    http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/8751/imgp1614rx4.jpg
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  2. repsSDN

    repsSDN Senior Member

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    Uhhh - the canvas looks sick.
    Sky - try thicken up your K cos it ent as fat, and try overlap your letters more.

    Im off on holiday so ill hopefully imrpove tht style when im gone and post pics when im back.
     
  3. amk

    amk Elite Member

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    Bump.
    great to see sumthin new form yah man


    good call Socrates...that was eaten for fuckign lunch !

    sky.keep using bars and bending them a little more everytime man.
    no addons yet !!!

    well..i could say the same for myself..

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    i got carried away listening to Jurassic 5 and did twirls everywhere...i then realised all those twirls add up to sumthing good..

    a key to where i can place addons.

    but does it look good anyways.
    im just tryna advanced more and more with this style of addon that suits this style of letter

    ..

    This was far far better

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    i need too chilllll and let shit like this floowww

    " we be te crew guess who the J U R A double S I C .. where in the place to be we got the rythym that makes yah fingers snap crackle pop fizz fizz "
     
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  4. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Amk I'm not feelin that one with all the swirls but you admit that it was bad so I'll just crit the second one.Pretty sick man.I like it.just a few extensions I'm not feeling.I would lose the extension on the bottom left of your A.I don't think you need to join bits up aswell.Lose all the joining bits.Finally I think you should get rid of the extension coming off the right leg of the K.

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    Sheeeet.That K is small.
    A little simple London style thing.Took me about 10 minutes.
     
  5. Hoostein

    Hoostein Senior Member

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    The D really doesn't go with it, and like you said the K is a bit small. I like that 'a'
    though.
     
  6. ...AMOK...

    ...AMOK... Member

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    sky- try and make the letters the same length apart from another... like teh S and the K are pretty close and then the Y is away from the K a bit more try and bring it in closer
    sume- shit is dope as hell that S is mad crazy and it's soooo clean
    AMK- i like that shit u went all out with those squggly's though huh? lol
    Drak- work on that K and the D is huge wrok on that too

    crits.... just workin on the basics...
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  7. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    iris: liking your style.
    Sumoe: gawwwd thats dope.
    uhhh: i like the canvas. little overspray with the stencil.
    amk: Just throw some color at it, i also like the squiggles.
    Drakula:i only like the a the rest of your letters are different sizes and whatnot.
    AMOK: too bendy, go just a bit simmpler.

    new name, starting over. "ICHE" Pronounced icky.
    critz? :D

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  8. Hoostein

    Hoostein Senior Member

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  9. -Sinn-

    -Sinn- Senior Member

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    Each - just go for straight letters
    Iche - like the second one on the right the one with all capitals
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    couldnt figure out how to get the rest of my name to match it crits?
     
  10. D E M O

    D E M O Senior Member

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  11. Hoostein

    Hoostein Senior Member

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    I got owned...

    Is this ANY better?
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  12. -Sinn-

    -Sinn- Senior Member

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    dont put the 3D over top of one of ur letters makes it look un organized
     
  13. ...AMOK...

    ...AMOK... Member

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    sinn- i'm feelin it thats pretty sick but why didn't you finish the forcefield?
    each- your 3d is messed up man try to focus more on the letters
    demo- thats sick bro forcefield could be a lil cleaner but nonetheless i still liek it

    crits?
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  14. CRN-one

    CRN-one Senior Member

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    I bought a six pack of prismacolor markers tonight (fucking expensive,) and wanted to break them in, so I made this. It's my first non-blockbuster piece that I've tried to color.

    ai4.photobucket.com_albums_y142_ZygoteSix_crn_onepiece1.jpg

    Crits / comments appreciated.
     
  15. CRN-one

    CRN-one Senior Member

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    I like the overall design, but I'm not really feeling the color scheme. I'm not all that great with color myself, so I can't recommend anything, but to me it looks incomplete. Maybe try filling in the white with a contrasting color? idk.
     
  16. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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    not really, id say use simples if u havent already. and when u colour only go one direction no matter the bends
     
  17. HoodRichSucka

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  18. The_Sheep

    The_Sheep Senior Member

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    DEMO- Get rid of those weird overlapping parts, its unflattering and throws the piece off, also, its apparent that you use bars but good letters need bars and structure, you lack structure, study it

    Hoodrich- The bottom part of your E sticks out way too far, either that or the top doesnt stick out far enough, fix one of them, that R has bad structure as well, the rounded part looks awkward, its too diamond shaped

    Been a while since i posted, been working on improving my style:

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    Critiques? Peace