bastardo dope shit man keep it up pocket change i unno about the swirl in the s but ur flow is good nez nice shading on the buildings and cans ave im feeling that e dice keep working with bars and the rest will come
bastardo - cool style.youll be outta here soon. kelio - nice bar usage. pocketchange - your flow is def. better than mine man. props drakula - i liked the sketch, maybe diff. color scheme woulda better suited it. some of my first stuff ever. done in nail polish lmao. yes i like scrodum
dice- complete your lines, don't sketch like that. ave- go a bit simpler. kelio- it doesn't flow much, but you're using bars, that's good. nez- tight fucking shading there. drak- get a thinner lining pen, and do your final on a new sheet of paper, unless you were going for that look. los- go into new to graff thread, look for stuff about bars and structure pocketchange, see my sig. bastardo- nothing to crit really man, just forward your style some more, try new things. chair- keep up the creativity, but work on flow and structure. dark- bubbles are nice, but try bars. first letter for an exchange, I usually don't like to post unfinished shit, but I feel like it. [Broken External Image]:http://img461.imageshack.us/img461/1060/scabsdn9.jpg always trying something different.
bastardo is killin it man, love those handys and sense you are now writing mers i am gonna asume you have heard of the rapper named murs, if not hes fresh
kelio i like it but i think ur o is too big and some of the letters have some odd extensions drakula i like it but i think instead of putting more arrows and extensions on the left side you should just take off some on the right bastardo and tryp i really like ur shit dark use bars captain i like it so far id like to see the rest (im crittin so i can get some but if you feel like i dont know what im talking about you can just ignore them ) [Broken External Image]:http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/3162/dscn0216rd8.jpg sooo i tried to stay simple but now that im lookin at it again in front of me i should've made my i and r taller but any other crits would be helpful
i think it would have looked better without the lines and dots in the letters. will more color be going in there?
i cant see your letters with all that flamboyant coloring. the drop shadows look good on some of them? nothing really sticks out to me as ill though. the last one kinda has a cool idea. still not feelin it though. work on it.
yo chek this out [Broken External Image]:http://photos1.hi5.com/0009/611/314/vieEl9611314-02.jpg CRITS PLEASE !!!
it must be working then. so, here's a new sketch. it has been ages since i visited this place. [Broken External Image]:http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/624/p1010592kp7.jpg
yo dark, ive seen your stuff you keep posting and i want you to try something out for me. AMK made this nice tut and i want you to try doing steps 1 and 2 only. try it maybe twice or so then post those. i bet you'll see a big difference if you try it.
i kno im in the wrong thread,but my boy wants to kno if theirs any writers that go by "coma". or write "coma"