does it say beds or reds? id say fix yur letters a bit and lose the arrow.
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which is best? crits?

 

i tag Kash

 

they both suck. go to the new to graff thread and start simple

 

none turned out really but i though id post

 

fuckin noobs! give crits before u get crits

 

this is your crit from me.
i didnteven need to type it

Jers...feeling thta philly shit man..looks ill

 

they suck indeed but its only because ur trying too hard. Start simple

 

you guys are all talking about my tags right? so what do u guys suggest i do differently?

 

i was talking to slomo. My suggestion (slomo) is to start over and focus more on letter structure than the skwiggles u do (a toy trademark). Morne- Urs are ok....PRACTICE is what developes ur style so keep practicing. These are a few tags i use..
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Simple but clean........Criticism WELCOMED

 

Don't write Base

 

stick with nesto sounds dope and looks dope

 

YO!!! Sezer ur handies are fucking wild son!!

 

alright emel you proved your point but thats no reason to change my name.
thanx for the crits to the ppl who did. emel u did get one thing right tho, i do need to sketch more since i havent sketched in like a week.

 

silent, fourth is best.

idiot, nes and nesto are way better than base.

 

bump for more crits.
FUCK THE FOURTH ONE....ive been usin that for like 4 months

 

i agree, 4th is best. and if you want to do something else you need to make one better not step backwards.
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what type or marker is that i think its a pilot im not sure

 

morne, you've definately got something you can build on. i like the 4th one but spread it out a bit, make it bigger and work on your e.
kash, i think you should stick with you books for a bit before you hit the street. practice a lot.
idiot, i'm feeling your stuff. mad steezy with some nice swagger.
sez, sick handstyles on all, never got anything bad to say about your tags.
faster i really like it. letters all fit together nice, good style.

some tags i've done lately. please crit.