what does that say scoot?

just drew,
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ok i guess i'll buy that G and E. but really man that N, no matter how you sell it just doen't read.

 

are there even letters ther?

 

not worth a post.

 

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i write kaptiv so im just trying to make it shorter.
not sure what else to do so im going to throw up ka
thoughts?

 

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took whahappens advice, didnt turn out how i wanted it tho.
crits?

 

caer, that e needs work coz it jus looks akward
u should get influence from asesr's work(not bitin), coz i swear to god his a's and e's are fucking amazing
the end-ur letters are to skinny, beef em up and dont leave big empty spaces
chalk-yea, the middle bar on the "s" is too long n i'm not feelin dat "o"
amk- i think u tryin to put in too much style, not feelin this rite now

 

god damn..
gotta get this place how it used to be man
GIVE CRITS TO GET CRITS.
freaking nora.

Morne...lol...did you even put effort into it ?...it seems asiff you just get a pen and draw the letters without doing them properly...no effort at all.sorry.

Kaptiv...pretty simple i guess....but it dosnt look right....the letters look off....use bars to make letters ... i doubt you will but hey thats my crit.

look in the new 2 graff thread for bar help.

GIVE CRITS TO GET CRITS IN THE TOY FORUM
add to your sig ^

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Bounty.
i aint pushin anything.
im tryna advanced with addons..
whats the fucking point in sticking with gay basic letters without moving on.
its rediculous.
you have to move on from basic lettering sometime.

 

whats so wrong with my letters? it looks like morne to me, try be more specific next time.
with yur letters i aint sure if it says AMK or A~K, so maybe work on that?

 

i think it looks a little better but curve the longer bottom parts of the m, like the parts i showed you, bend them like how the other letters bend
just a suggestion you dont HAVE to do it
amk dont do that tag again, the piece is okay
really fucking new and abstract

 

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Possible throwie

 

posiible throwie upie in my mouthie


thats awfull, new to graff thread

 

noo amk..not liking that style...usualy love what u do but damn...this def is the wrong way to moving to basics to addons..random addons that dont make sense and just make the piece look ugly..lost ur letter structure...ur addons should fit in with the letter structure

 

GUYS I NEED HELP WITH THIS S and figuring out what the extensions should be..

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AMK-It's bad, bro...

But, keep messing with extensions. There was a point that I fucked with extensions and it was ugly as fuck, but doing that helped me with doing extensions later on. Keep doing what you're doing, messing with extensions. But, don't forget about your letters.

 

I feel like you are critiquing mine lol, can you help me or advise me as to what I should make the extensions on my piece into? arrows, hands, cocks, anything what do you think? plus I dont know how to finish the S and quick suggestions?

 

from this spot on, if u are not giving crits, or posting flicks, your post will be deleted. i dont care about bumps, bump all u want, if u bump excessively i will delete your post too, flick or not. this means, if u bump it once or twice ok, no bumping on the same page. no bumping more the 3 times. use your heads here. if your giveing props to someone, use pm's. i will delete your "that shit ill", or, "i really have nothing to say about that its sooooo good." me and the other toy mods have way to many post to scroll through and we dont have the time to be fuckin with pointless post. ya feel me? if u have a problem with what me, or any other mod deletes for that matter, pm that mod first. if your still not happy then pm msfyt, but shes a busy woman. hopefully soon we well see 70%flicks 30%crit.


-fube-

 

amk to many add ons. every leg of every letter is basically an extention, the structure is lacking some.less add ons, and some extentions dont make sens

 

i honestly dont know whats so bad about this.
I actually like it.
its not like the average graffiti.
its something different, keep working on it amk.
maybe lose the curvy things at the top of the a & K