acme rtc?

 

obviously a attempt at a wicked work on it more though and get rid of the money nose pumpkin. Here is my sensai of graffiti use it for reference
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yeah critique it please

 

thats not an attempt, that is a wicked
post your shit then
and thats not even my good one anyways..

 

hahahaha
id say get rid of the hairy balloon
and the really fucking wack letters]
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The only tags im kind of feeling on this page is ravid (bask) and the end. headin in the right direction guys lookin decent.
Others...keep workin on it =].

 

wahappen??? exchange?
with a busted pen:

 

fuck

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fuck, didnt work.

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arkroth - make your letters all the same size
some shit inside an abandoned building
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dajam - i like it but whats with the big ass line behind/to the side of it?

 

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i like the r alot

somethin i did for a battle
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this whole page is lookin pretty fresh.
bazer ilike that wrote in blood style.
whahappen? thant philly steez is progresivelly gettin better.
jers- nice and simple lose that line going out the bottom of th s
da jam dope .
roolete i like your letters but not the flow of the word.
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1nonlybaze-i like that busted pen tag
dajam410- i like it cept for the o
roolete- i like it





crits please

 

K, repost.
Ty to the guy who crited already.
Ignore the crown.
How can i make this tag better? How can i improve my letters help me outt im a complete tooyyyy!

 

Cert1- Theres too much going on around your handstyle, try and clean it up a little bit.

Oh, and do you actually write Cert?

 

Homemade ghetto krink, older handstyle.

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Shit dajam, that tag is tight!

What's up guys, I'm new to these forums, here's my tag with the new OTR 071 I just got, I'm hoping to get some crits.

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