I was pointing fun at you for giving the 411 to people like your cope 2 or some shit. Captain thx Its a progression which I don't plan on quiting at.
bump cuz it was at the shit end of the page. =[ and you people tellin base about bayse... totally different spelling, totally different style. and "base".. i told you before theres another base in phillie thatll burn your ass so bad. just give up. youve been writing just as long as i have, maybe longer but haven't gotten down some descent structure.
if there's something hard to come up with its extensions :< i usually tell my self: "just bend it!" and at some point something pops out. that goes for letters mostly though. daws bite like a lioness hunting caddle
[Broken External Image]:http://img466.imageshack.us/img466/4375/005qe9.jpg Morne just keep pushing out those straight letters, you are improving it just takes practice. Start looking at other pieces and try and feed off of the way they are constructed to begin to understand how to bend and construct more complicated letters when it comes time.
1.that base is on the other side of the united states. 2. i write base48. the numbers imply im not the original and dont claim to be. every name is taken. and if you dont want me to give helpful advice then whatever. [Broken External Image]:http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5932/1002273gb8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/5932/1002273gb8.4274c046b1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/3999/1002272cr5.jpg
the throw is good decent just work on consistancy i suppose. the piece needs to step back a bit. HOWEVER, every name is absolutely not taken. there is no other CAER. try fucking harder. that is a pathetic defeatest attitude that DOESNT BELONG IN GRAFFITI. try a name thats not playyyyyed.
roolete-i gues its ok, go with something a little mores simples to read when starting, thats just me morne-i think you shoukd use stright letters and keep them all the same, i do like the simp tho. base-one i like your name, and two i like you shit nice throw nice simp. keep up the good work.
hmm okay i guess i could like... choose 3 random numbers and letters... i like m's. ummm. 3 is my lucky number. 1 would be tight... m31! thats not taken... im gonna keep practicing with this name.
i mean, dont do it on my accnt, im just saying that shits played. m13? thats gonna be a bitch of a name.
ante up- waaay more simple.. im sure ppl have told you to use bars.. trust me it works.. base- lose the wak extention in the A and do somethin with the S like make the bottom touch the A or somethin i unno its buggin me ..lol just foolin around tryin to find some diferent way to place my letters.. (saga)
yo im not a huge fan of the jagged rawer styles but ill crit it as best ican. i dont like the way the two bars of the K come out so far from eachother. make em come out at the same place and angle away from eachother. i like the spiky top shit on the top bar. i dont like the E really its too confused. i think its because of the way all the bars got squisshed toghether i would just keep going with where your at and work on flow. but also do simples every now and then to help your progression so ive been doin the simples for a while and my style really developed fast. and peopletold me to progress it a little further. so theres some simpler stuff and then i tried to branch it out a little and add some flex. they all pen sketchess by the way. dial ill try n crit that later but i gotta go.
DIAL ON. u remind me of jank in some wierd way. u prob dont know who the fuckim talking abt. not calling a bite by any means. its something abt the construction. ur S has no structure, otherwise keep with it, uve got potential. i feel like a prick saying that. who the fuck am i. w/e.
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