[Broken External Image]:http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/9190/1282866xf7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/8308/1282871ql5.jpg nice stuff dajam . . . i think we know some of the same people painting in your room is cool if your mom is down with it . . . sometimes my mom comes out to my practice board and im like "ma get your ass in inside" cuz that gets alil embarrasing having your mom cheer you on with painting . . .
DJAM-nice shit im liking the simpss, keep that shit up, there sooo clean, i like the top one more. skeelo- nice filll on the M, poss lose SOME of the Extenctions maybe? i donno. but i lso like the MK
u guys need to shut the fuck up. if the dude wants to paint in his fuckin room let him destroy it know what im sayin??? shit like this helps in the long run. and if he has wallpaper its even better cuz itll peel off when hes fucked it up enough. thats what were doin at a homies house. weve hit it with everything man. markers, paint, mops, stickers.
karma:love those throwups jersone:nice piece syrne, funny i used to write ds to when i just started, i like your throw up but i would definetly use another cap for your fillinn and work from side to side so u don`t miss spots and add some bubbles or something so u don`t see other tags or outlines.. naysayer`s 1st:looks ok for a 1st piece but still needs a lot of work, try to make your letters the same size, work on your structure,fillin and im missing a forcefield or background, 2nd:its a good thing your letters are the same size but you still need 2 work on the structure, forcefield,im missing shadow and i would use white or light blue for highlights btw.. your throwups looks ok i like the structure but keep workin on your a & e ver:add some shadow and get rid of the open spaces, iwould keep sketchin for while .. smae:really needs work on the last 2 letters and try to get rid off the open space between the s and m crimate:i like you 1st piece best but you really need to work on your fillin, letterstructure and use shadow next time da jam:love those pieces, clean,nice colours and structure skeelo:like the colours, fill in and letterstructure, good job baze:i would add shadow,aswel as a forcefield next time that would make your throw up a lot better
someone - i like the first one alot more then the second .. the second looks like it says sumeone, and also it looks like the wall ate that paint up like it was its job
Ayte- looks good and clean! I suggest working on your Y and T, your A and E looking good though- your E is prob. the best
holy fuckk I like this alot EASY. that e is really original, haven't seen anything like that before. clean shit too. damn your style is really great. so visually orgasmic!
i'm not calling a direct bite on you easy. but i think it's a bit to similar to this not my pic ps ENMITY [Broken External Image]:http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/7283/b35i006pu4.jpg just my opinion. not trying to start beef or anything.
naw man, easy's e destroys that one, way more clean and fresh. maybe he got the idea from him, but he killed it anyways. i wouldnt call it a bite. if anything he advanced on it. which is what everyone whose starting off does before they get their own style. they see things they like and try and use the idea their own way. no beef intended.
Bump. View attachment 302216 This shit was hot when it came out. Everyone has bitten that E so hard. Lets all just say, "Okay." And move along.
View attachment 302227 Sorry about the bad picture here, stupid camera phone sucks. View attachment 302228 I know the N and the E look bogus on this, I fucked it up but anything else that needs improvement? View attachment 302229 Crits appreciated once again. Thanks everybody.
hey at least ur gettin up. id say round out all the straight edges, and make the loop on the p more upright so its not facing downwards. same with the e. make all the letters the same size
Ayte- looks straight for the most part, but I'd make the top part of the T a little more like a T, instead of like an upside down L.