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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. AMansNotACamel

    AMansNotACamel Senior Member

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    That Morn sketch is a thousand times triller than the other thousand you have posted....
    On the real though, make fat bars, skinny bars, bent bars or whatever cas you may as well be posting the same sketch on every single page.
     
  2. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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    azteka- handstyles are nice, sketch looks like you rushed a little
    risk- just try regular 3d
    sumoe- clean
    seek- lookin good
    morn- looks like you thought about the outline way too much


    my first oneliner. kinda sloppy but you get the idea. still workin on a more legible n

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  3. Chalk

    Chalk Senior Member

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    Morn good job on keepin on. When it comes to making clean lines. it has a lot to do with with motion of your body not just your hand. same thing translates into when you paint.

    based of your sketch i sorta feel like you are pressing pretty firmly when you draw. also seems like you are just drawing with your hand not your arm. to do a long clea line. it's not just about moving your wrist. it's about moving your whole arm and shoulder.once again that will translate into when you paint your piece it becomes a WHOLE body movement to get the clean lines you can just make a short line take afew steps and repeat. you'll have to kinda find the elegance into making a flow of body to help get clean lines.

    also your letters are looking a lot better. your R should be a bit wider like the rest of your letters. and the bottom leg of your R where it comes out from the from the main structure bar, i don't think you should have it connecting where you have it. i feel like it should come out right where the the curve of the R meets the main bar. just my opinion on that.
    and a diagram to help if it rambling didn't make sense.
    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v495_k_vandal_mornrr.jpg
     
  4. silentchaos14

    silentchaos14 Elite Member

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  5. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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    bump, bottom of page
     
  6. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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    ive practiced and gotten more used to it

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  7. Naysayer

    Naysayer Senior Member

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    sen1, your N's look like Us change them up a bit. other than that its a great one liner.

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    I thought I had posted this but I guess I didn't.
     
  8. AyteYourCookies

    AyteYourCookies Senior Member

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  9. whahappen?

    whahappen? Elite Member

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    dope as fuck
    holy shit
     
  10. Naysayer

    Naysayer Senior Member

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    you need to keep things straight on your A here. you see how the horizontal bar isnt a uniform width? and same with the half circle at the end. Here I drew little lines so you could see where it isn't aligned..

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    the rest looks really great tho. keep it up.
     
  11. iloveyou.alive

    iloveyou.alive Banned

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    nah changing the bar is fine, your problem is that the change is so damn rigid, theres no flow, the rest of ur letters are all curves.
     
  12. kelio

    kelio Senior Member

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    dim: that d looks good.
    amk: really feeling those characters.
    BORG: i would make the c bigger and your handdy loooks good.
    silentchaos14: your gettting there slowly but you are.
    Naysayer: bring your letters closer i wouldn't worry about coloring and whatnot
    until you have some good letters, also work on flow. just keep it up.

    Went simpler decided i would listen. critz? just working on bars and floww.
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  13. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    Sate keep the letters the same size and width and lose the bar things sticking out of the end of the letters.

    New name REKO(don't ask why)

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    I know the extensions are shite but crit the letters please.
     
  14. Stim

    Stim Senior Member

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    Your really progressing in leaps and bounds drak, erase those lines. I wanna see whats up with the letters flat out.
     
  15. NEZ89

    NEZ89 Senior Member

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  16. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    that kareks fressssssh, letters nuttin special

    btw moomins are a weird cow/hippo animal cartoon in the uk
     
  17. sex without condoms

    sex without condoms Elite Member

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    ugg i have shit to post but i want a new page cause im a fucking slutt
    but here's an old flick to fill the pages for me.
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  18. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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  19. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    sen i like the oneliners...
    drak if ur not gonna listen to simples then watever...
    sex-ehhh not a style i "dig" but it lukks good
    more 3d...
    I, sorry the flash fucked up shadin in the top left on both... >:O!!!
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  20. Chalk

    Chalk Senior Member

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    just trying out something new. i like some parts. really don't like a lot of others.
    aimg.photobucket.com_albums_v495_k_vandal_chalkgreennn.jpg

    -drak - i'm feelin it quite a bit. the one thing that is sort of bothering me is how busy the middle of your E seems.

    -sex with out condoms - it's like sex with out condoms.

    - senthefirst - that oneliner is pretty damn hot. and the handy i think would look a lot better. if you made the first E bigger.