That Morn sketch is a thousand times triller than the other thousand you have posted.... On the real though, make fat bars, skinny bars, bent bars or whatever cas you may as well be posting the same sketch on every single page.
azteka- handstyles are nice, sketch looks like you rushed a little risk- just try regular 3d sumoe- clean seek- lookin good morn- looks like you thought about the outline way too much my first oneliner. kinda sloppy but you get the idea. still workin on a more legible n
Morn good job on keepin on. When it comes to making clean lines. it has a lot to do with with motion of your body not just your hand. same thing translates into when you paint. based of your sketch i sorta feel like you are pressing pretty firmly when you draw. also seems like you are just drawing with your hand not your arm. to do a long clea line. it's not just about moving your wrist. it's about moving your whole arm and shoulder.once again that will translate into when you paint your piece it becomes a WHOLE body movement to get the clean lines you can just make a short line take afew steps and repeat. you'll have to kinda find the elegance into making a flow of body to help get clean lines. also your letters are looking a lot better. your R should be a bit wider like the rest of your letters. and the bottom leg of your R where it comes out from the from the main structure bar, i don't think you should have it connecting where you have it. i feel like it should come out right where the the curve of the R meets the main bar. just my opinion on that. and a diagram to help if it rambling didn't make sense.
[Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/MorneNew.jpg thanx for the diagram. this sketch didnt turn out how i wanted it to but i think im sketched out for the day. crits?
sen1, your N's look like Us change them up a bit. other than that its a great one liner. View attachment 302365 I thought I had posted this but I guess I didn't.
you need to keep things straight on your A here. you see how the horizontal bar isnt a uniform width? and same with the half circle at the end. Here I drew little lines so you could see where it isn't aligned.. View attachment 302373 the rest looks really great tho. keep it up.
nah changing the bar is fine, your problem is that the change is so damn rigid, theres no flow, the rest of ur letters are all curves.
dim: that d looks good. amk: really feeling those characters. BORG: i would make the c bigger and your handdy loooks good. silentchaos14: your gettting there slowly but you are. Naysayer: bring your letters closer i wouldn't worry about coloring and whatnot until you have some good letters, also work on flow. just keep it up. Went simpler decided i would listen. critz? just working on bars and floww.
Sate keep the letters the same size and width and lose the bar things sticking out of the end of the letters. New name REKO(don't ask why) View attachment 302412 View attachment 302413 I know the extensions are shite but crit the letters please.
Your really progressing in leaps and bounds drak, erase those lines. I wanna see whats up with the letters flat out.
ayte- that pretty cool Reko- love the handie Sen- holy shit thats fuckin raw son Mu'Min, muslim, means Believer kinda rushed it [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1365/im001262na8.jpg and i decided to change the peice a bit [Broken External Image]:http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/5871/nezmuralpt2yj7.jpg still not done though
that kareks fressssssh, letters nuttin special btw moomins are a weird cow/hippo animal cartoon in the uk
ugg i have shit to post but i want a new page cause im a fucking slutt but here's an old flick to fill the pages for me.
sen i like the oneliners... drak if ur not gonna listen to simples then watever... sex-ehhh not a style i "dig" but it lukks good more 3d... I, sorry the flash fucked up shadin in the top left on both... >:O!!! View attachment 302434 an anuther c View attachment 302435
just trying out something new. i like some parts. really don't like a lot of others. -drak - i'm feelin it quite a bit. the one thing that is sort of bothering me is how busy the middle of your E seems. -sex with out condoms - it's like sex with out condoms. - senthefirst - that oneliner is pretty damn hot. and the handy i think would look a lot better. if you made the first E bigger.