iroc - about your throw, i would add an extension to the N thats the same as the one at the top of the A and that should make it look sweet. heres sum shit, been trying out a new style:
ake- not feelin it, the A looks wierd. [Broken External Image]:http://i186.photobucket.com/albums/x65/silentchaos14/IDEAL/IDEAL4.jpg shit from tonight. crits?
no. not really, at all. its not sick, and its not very clean. i dont know if im just not on enough anymore, or if all the better people have moved to the advanced forum.
its been awhile since ive posted anything cus i didnt feel th eneed to show every single thing ive done to progressbut im getting better. silentvandel - looks good akes - block letters first. the letters are very uneven ideal - its good that your doing simples but try to keep your lines straighter and not all jaggy. but other then that the leters look pretty even. just lose the extensions for now and sry for bad quality. i used my cell phone for pic
silentvandel - "w" could use some work Ideal - ummm.... bars? [Broken External Image]:http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd79/teaguesyN87/corstagup.jpg crits
this looks jack shit like Gesus.. so shut the fuck up whining. it looks more of a really whack peice that needs seriously working on and toning down to the letters like im typing with yes you got it simples blocks and i jus said all this without any full stops or commas meaning im out of breath in my head some how. Daws....thats is Haws Haws HAWT !
yeh IROK gettin there not make stuff into bars and try minimalising the bending of the bars keeping to that style this will give u nicer sence of letter structure! then u can add curves un and it will look so damn fresh! stick with that style dnt try and be original ur own flair and style comes naturaly much later!
eskimo, definitely tone that shit down for now. work on the basics. i wouldn't call bites on gesus though.... crimate, its good you're using a relative uniform shape for each letter. your structure is a little bit shaky. but theres potential there. work on the C the most. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/pinkdrippies.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/stylemaybe-1.jpg
... i critted up there ehhhh ? ! Nem....yo doing straight letters uuh.....buutttt....they aint done properly..you addin flava to that shit and you shudnt be...get letters down then go onto flavaahhh 5 minit quicken.. View attachment 312873
i agree, amk's older shit had better letters. amk bring back the havok battle. throwie thread is shit View attachment 312881