Try to drop that connection at the end. It isn't joining any of the letters, so it's pointless, and takes up too much space.

 

hobbes u should just do regular letters 4 now

elite on the 2nd 1 u should take the things out of the s

 

those phillys are horrible

 

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lol, camera phones are even worse in the dark lol

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Can I have some crits for this (other than the poor photography lol)

 

crisco keep practicing but start with simpler letters

 

Naw man, keep at it. Looks better then when I started.

Try writing it out in just regular printing, nice an' neat with no extra stuff, then you will kinda get your head around the letters shape. (like punishment lines @ school)

Then start bending them a little, not a lot, just enough to give em' a little charactor.

Then you just slowy keep working it until your able to bend the letters to make everything flow nice and clean.

It takes sometime, so get working on it.

 

yep keep practicing
letters dont haveeee to be fancy or shit. just work on flow and then letters will come naturally if you just practice.

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tag

crits welcome

 

acres- the R looks too much like a B

 

is it normal not to be feelin your own shit?

 

rofls o course, took me so long to even be OK with my stuff. then i kinda like some stuff i do... but i still give myself lots of shit :|

btw crits? :>

 

good thing im not alone lol, every time i draw somethin or paint somethin, i always say its shit

 

your letter style doesnt flow very well. just too many points. make it flow smooth the whole way through. start with simple letters like your doing at school and just add some flare to it.

Crits please. I write Mutter/Mutr now, even though my name says Bets.
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Just something quick with a dry erase marker haha i ran out of supplys

 

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Bets:I like it noicee

 

BETS urs is pretty dope

tell me what u guys think? i need some crits

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Kasr, the K needs some work, otherwise I like it.

 

just some tags around town.KRITS(daas is in my crew)
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geek=like the guy but you really need to work on your tag practice practice practice

kasr-like it just the k is fucked up i thought it was an h