1st. not really feeling the N but the R and A are lookin dope. dont really like color combination 2nd nice colors but the addon on the S kinda kills me inside =[ not feeling the N again 3rd color combo lookin good. really diggin the A. not feeling the N "again hah" but open up the bottum half of the E and youll be set 4th color combo- loose the weird little green spots. i dont kno how that fits into the piece haha the R looks dope and the S is gettin better 5th really love that color combo. im feelin the A and R the S is ok. but once again. the N lol 6th. possible the best letter structure out of all of them. really liken it alot. the N is perfect and so are the other leters. they all flow with the same style. overall: your good. great pencil/pen control. i didnt see you go over the lines once haha. good pieces but work on the N and color combo. i liked it alot
lol thanks N's are bitches n 3rd one the "E" is rly a "y" (narsy) lol its more clear if you were lookin at the drawing itself n its the first "y" ive ever done idk if that changes anything n i just noticed it rly rly looks like An "e"
Narsey shit looks sick just move the letters abit closer Ideal you gota do block letters like on your keyboard sen everythings good except somthing about the upper part of the s seems funny sezer dope characters and nice simples. im new... crits?
lol i dont wana wait a few years lol but yeah i know it takes time but any crits to speed up the process?
Keep doing the simples and don't get ahead of yourself. Getting ahead of yourself 99% of the time is a waste of time. Fastest way for most people is to just keep working on simples.
Work on your hand dude. Also most writers you see that totally kill have been writing for 15 years plus, just stick with it.
tezer those are mad chars narsy i like everysingle one of em! samp that shit makes me just wanna try somethin sick like that but i need to stick with simples for now haha love it beser- flawless simples! ok ive been working on my letters the S is kinda funky but fuck it ill put it up anyway am i getting ahead of myself? crits plz sorry for shitty cam pics
i love it, i want to draw surrealistically can you point me in the right direction? as for the letters, the A is fire, the F doesnt really look like a f get rid of the stuff on the bottom right, take the breaks out of the s, h is simple but nice
haha thanks toke yeah i see it now the f looks like a J that s was experimental didnt know where i was goin with it haha yeah you like surrealism? sick thats my steez mang yeah i can hep you out if ya want
help me out with this y someone said i should make the bottom fatter and more 3d and the top skinnier?
fash - i think its too flash, with the hole in the top making it look like a G and the break in the tail and the extension through the body of the Y and the arrow, it makes it look like you are trying too hard. i dunno, mabye colour in the 3D and see if it looks better or focus more on changing up the letter instead of just adding extensions... heres some shit from late: A tag/throw/character, its kinda all combined into one:
^i'v always loved your characters,the top one the letters are ok,seconde one i only see a mix between a handie and a character nice work