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people encouraging things like that are why so few writers on here progress... at least it has flow. it also has the potetial to burn. What you need to do... is take the letters.... And ditch everything else. then re evaluate them. Make corrections. Then add the rest of the shit. then it will be good. [Broken External Image]:http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/610/1002422oo8.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img45.imageshack.us/img45/5069/1002423yw9.jpg heres from a month ago. look where i am now (a few pages back) Muchhh better.
failone...crazy shit, i like it a lot...id go through wit like a finepoint sharpie and go over the pencil marks...nice work bigel, you got mad color effects. im not even gonna ask how thats done...nice work b
Somthing im using for a name battle that Avore aka Drone called me out on ... Crits i like the style but it looks like it cant progress very far you know what i mean>sexwithoutcondoms
ye i am having a hard time bending around my other letters and making it look decent and keeping a flow n e ideas to start me off?
bigel get outta tha toy thread jeez [Broken External Image]:http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/5547/imgkv5.jpg shitty throw for the kuest battle
sex- liek the lettrs not the coloring besar- ur on the right track....keep workin on the b mostly robyn- nice style keep workin on it and itll be sick lifer- likin the throw [Broken External Image]:http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5708/picture002pc9.jpg bumpin that for some crits ^ [Broken External Image]:http://img143.imageshack.us/img143/5470/nasr001bm2.jpg fuckin arounds wit colouring. looks shitty.....crits on this tooo ^
still gota play around with the r but i think the b e s and a are good nasr your shit looks like it can evolve into some mad wildstyle maze looking shit lol but your colour kills the peice
throughout the whole peice? ive done that and it looks like shitthroughout the whole peice or r u talking on certian letters specificly? the whole piece it wont look as shitty as it does now the edges are wicked shaky and theres a line in the s that goes too far. I agree wit funerals line in s goes too far. all in all good work.
holy shit i havent been here in a long time beizarro, your letters look good just generally looking at them, but when you look closely at each letter they seem to be wierd i gueess. for example your R n B look awkward, pretty good starting blocks tho feebs, pretty cool i guess, its different and i quite like it, not much else to say just keep workingh with it nasr - beefen up the lines a bit, they are too thin botom one is pretty good bigel you dont know haw happy i was to see you shit again, good stuff man noting too special, peen frestyle random stuff ? crits ?\ [Broken External Image]:http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/3007/dsc00357rz7.jpg went back abit and messed aroudn with some stuff [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/7177/seqw1.jpg i plan on finishing this one soon [Broken External Image]:http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/9307/seuyvh6.jpg
seyar: that second sketch on the first pic, the A is messed up. that E is too big on the second pic and that third flick is fuckin nice.
nasr - the blue one is hot..dont know bout the second one febes - nice unique style seyar - the top one on the first page is dope. i was bored...crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/9105/neosketchnm9.jpg
Your R is always your weakest letter but this one is on point. i would have just made part of the J skinner to match the skinny and thick style you have goin on in the other letters