bazer: i love your "e" in both of them but more so in the first. ayte: like the 3D and the A,Y and T but that E looks out of place to me, maybe make it a little smaller or use an upper case E if you keep it about that size. dim: love it except for the G, or third letter i might be looking at it wrong, but it doesn't really look like a G to me, if that is what you were going for bump, and from that last guy that gave me crit, im now thinking of moving the hole in the A up into the center of the letter without breaking the border anywhere
Hyun - The H is way below the other letters and I dont get the arrows and extensions at all because they arent connected to anything they are a just in the background other than that the font is nice and the light spots look good.
ras- the s kinda stands out while the epr flow soo well, w/e its still very dope baze- all of that is sexy i cant see much to crit drak- the a and b flow really good i think the r overlaps the A a little too much dim- the only problem i have is i dont like those arrows they dont fit imo but solid letters glas- just make the holes normal itll look fine hyun- lose those arrowd and keep sketchin it up [Broken External Image]:http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/2663/fbhghme0.jpg i got me a mini b book yea yea......thats teh cover^ [Broken External Image]:http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/8012/fbhgh001uj0.jpg some cursive shits^ [Broken External Image]:http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/5286/nnnn002by0.jpg and a repost^ CRITS P L E A S E
shame dope. amk good to see u improve ur selve do summthing different. snor plz dont write that and do simples. vitr with the blue purple peice don do that extention on the r. idea dont break up ur letters man just bend ur bars. heres mine. critsssss.
5 min. simple.... Nasr, I like the yellow one! Dansk, cool, I like it TeeZ, this shit is hot, can't wait to see it finished! 951, loose the arrows and it will be pretty good! Ayte, dope piece! Dim, nice sketch, ink it! Nice stickers baze, and that zes sketch looks great!
Another one with the same letters, dont playa hate. [Broken External Image]:http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture372.jpg I got it going on, even flip 'em on this song [Broken External Image]:http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u55/str8gangsta_01/Picture373.jpg
bbbump ayte- feelin both, smooth fade on the 3d in the first one btw wing- i like simples, but don't connect the letters. keep em close together tho. puge-feelin it glas-same as earlier
spag- pretty nice throwie, work on it some more. nice simple, clean it up, throw some 3d and colors and its alllll gooooood View attachment 319407 View attachment 319408 which throwie is better, growing or staying the same size? and some gay little piece View attachment 319409
geks-i like the growing one better messin around with a different throw style. idk if i'll stick with it or not. crits?
Went really simple.. [Broken External Image]:http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/8990/scan0002ra2.jpg crits are welcomed -- Geks- Not really feelin the green piece...I rather like the last two though..Nice colours and letters. renegade185- Go simpler than this...It's currently too squished together. spag- Would like to see the last piece cleared up a bit..I can imagine it will look good with crisp lines. I also rather like the quick throwie but maybe not the green around it.
about - nice simples. not really excitin tho... reck - nice but clean it up a bit. looks sorta messy imo heres ma first go at a throwie..... [Broken External Image]:http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/954/tz2zj4.jpg for on the run...crits?
i know i didnt post any comments but i dont feel confident enough in my graff knowledge to give sum, i dont wanna give crits that might be bad ill atlease give sumthing but it might not b good... Hyphy: i dont realy like the top part of the Z where theirs 2 bumps if u know wat i mean lololzheffer: i would not worry bout many colors right now, start of by getting a dope lettering and clean 1 or 2 colors fill in and then, when u get the hang of it, u can go abit wilder with ur colors....keep it clean [Broken External Image]:http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/9787/crayonplombav5.jpg PS: geks, growing one looks dope
hyphy- the Z looks i little too complicated in the center eack- nice style. the arrows kinda come outta nowhere though, if you know what i mean. other than that, it looks pretty clean.
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make it a capital e and the shits dope. View attachment 319428 View attachment 319429 View attachment 319430