hahaahahaha oh shit i didnt even realize that was the monopoly man. i saw that shit awhile ago.
besar- try something different. u seem to have that simple down pretty good.

 

bump for more crits

 

^^the i takes away from the piece, too big, make it the same size as the other letters

 

seize. it doesn't have any flow to it and borg is right, the big I in the middle takes away from it. try making your letters by using bars, cause it will open a whole new level of possibilities for you...

 

mmcritz?
(note the backwards ness..)

 

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crits?

 

Berst- I like it but fix the S. Make it as big as the other letters.

Okay, Heres mine I did last night.

NiSPi!

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This is a draft. I need ideas of what I should change or add.

I am already going to change the P and I am not going to add a drop shadow.
Anything else?

 

repost

 

dont get ahead of yourself. stick to simples until you rock the fuck out of them

 

im prolly gona switch my name up to beas

 

besar-your simps are rly improvingalot
nispi-go back to simples your letters arent developed n look garbagey
seka-pretty dope but make the s' taller n work on the k'
603-lose the arrow ,work on the first letter cant tell if its a b' or an r' n space out the r' and the s' they look crunched
seize-im def diggin your style but get rid of the space in the middle of your word

 

enormous: you got potential dont work on coloring jus keep on those letters
eskimo2: do simples with some style
beser: work on the s and the r a lot

 

besar keep at it bro!!!
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HAPPY TURKY DAYYY!!!

Fuckin 6 hours fleight last night. did aton of sketches

EXCHANGE FOR HAVOK. sorry for being a month late.

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15 min sketchhh.

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drone your new shit is wayy beter then the old shit keep it up
enig dope fill on the second one but one your first two the k's look fucked
nispi that sketch reminds me of crumpled paper
enor looks fresh dope 3D



trying three D seeing as i dont use it much crits?

 

Comments on what you think plese

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Quick side thing at work
crits please
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dope. that would look fresh on a freight. with like a backround, or drop.