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i write solo normally but im startin KAKE to wht ones better top or bottom?

 

I'd say top is better, but fix that E!

 

how any ideas??

 

nvm i got something

 

Akel- i like the A and K but the E's a bit off

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nez tht fridge is dope as shit on ur myspace bro

 

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Drunk,
Dont really like it but w/e cant win em all
Foneeeee

 

looksfine bro

 

its a bit hard to see the F
but still straight

 

Burnin shit cuz i can
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tht ideas mad dope imma buck on the burnin shit if u dont mind ha

 

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Lines were messed up cause of resizing. Plus I screwed up so it's also kind of sloppy.
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This is pretty much garbage but I see potential.

 

sotek, fix the 3d on the k and work on basic letters before you play with curls.
fluffy, play with fire and you'll get burned. Problably not too badly though, and it really won't hurt enough to bug you, so it's totally worth it.
fail, it looks pretty good.
nez, cut down on useless extensions.
swoe, experiment with other words, and it's time to vary up the style a bit more. you got that shit down pat already.
dying, work on balance, it looks awkward, like it could trip and fall.

Had some fun with arrows today, sketch and concept(ignore the letters in it, i just wanted an idea of how it would look with a piece) respectively:
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and some shit from yesterday.
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beyond: all the letters of that second pic look like they dont belong next to each other, like that S looks like part of a throw with the K and T part of a simple piece. maybe to start out, try working with a theme to get a better idea of structure or new ways to bend letters once you're ready to distort them more.

 

I think I understand. It'd be hard to put spirals in a 'K' or 'T' but I'm sure practice will see to that.

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I think it's a little better but still a lot of room for improvement.

 

captain- ur letters in the first peice are good but the arrows in the back grond ruined it to be quite honest

 

sumthing im trying......still fixing it up........FEBS

 

throw i canme up with in spanish today...throwys arent my thing so if you could help me out or let me know how this one is...i think its alright..

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I'd say letters are a little -too- scrunched. Give them some room, or perhaps lessen the amount of curve they have on them.