here you go eddie akso calm down on some of the whips and shit but it looks clean man keep working with that style until you rele have something that u can build off of
[Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/8907/laces2nh9.png [Broken External Image]:http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7528/lacesqr8.png seti i like yuore stuff can u post some ur old style so i can understand wat u sayin in big boys thread.
[Broken External Image]:http://img410.imageshack.us/img410/8907/laces2nh9.png [Broken External Image]:http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/7528/lacesqr8.png seti i like yuore stuff can u post some ur old style so i can understand wat u sayin in big boys thread.
fucked up on the a so its just sey i'll fix it later lace- top ones pretty hot just dont bring the c so far into the a seti- im not feelin that one ilikepie- im diggin ur style that shits fire dawse- its pretty tight i just dont like the d it looks kinda like a w tezer- ill as always seek- i like ur style just not that r maybe a capital R would flow better akso- lose the extension things and keep just the letters, add some 3d and thats shit is fire
It looks good, but on a 3d that curves inward you should make the highlights the same, istead of just lining up with their letter
lope: that throwup is sick Seek:canT read it but looks good.. Tezer:handstyle look sick,piece looks allright, not really feelin the fillin and the structure of your R.. Cezr:looks dope but stop beeing so lazy, with some shadow and a forcefield it would be sick... daws:looks allright, but im not really feelin the colourscheme ilikepie:looks dope to but would look so much better with colours,shadow etc.. akso:slow down on the extensions.. dim:looks ok but get rid of the bar underneeth and work on the R.. seti:sick but why didn`t you finished it.. lace:looks allright but the c definely needs some work.. sey:looks ok but i would make the top (left)of your Y a bit smaller and the bottom a bit more like you did with the s... Sex:sorry but i can only read the 12 underneeth..what does it say
thanx statik..you propably posted that sketch when i was still typing my crits (i typ with only 1 finger ) here`s some feedback: your sketch is lookin good but i would change the top of your A and W and make the right side simular to the left side and add a bar on the bottom of the N to avoid the open space..
seti- i like em. always loved 3d stuff but i cant do that shit. for the battle, love or hate welcome. View attachment 330246