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has no flow at all

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thats tight

.

 

pretty dope man.. i like the second half better though, flows better and is more spaced out

 

serge man your shits hot many different styles
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this i did for an exchange

 

no real structure though serge

 

ban serge this is for pen freestyles and out of like 15 peices 4 of them were pen freestyles
and the sextuple posting is WHACK

 

New style throw i'm trying out.

 

i cant tel what the first character is but the n is dope

 

EN

 

some sloppy pen shit, i need to take more time on this shitt...




I think I'm going to give up on that throwup style

edit: crits.
mind or matter - I'm liking that style keep working on it
serge - some of those are pretty nice

 

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make a vertical bar in the E with the same jagged line thing. It will make it more legible and even better.

 

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Post Your Shit On The Same Post! Wrong Thread!

 

edit post i was talkin bout got deleted

 

FUCKEN BUMP THIS SHIT!
just stop double postin tho
haha