Havn't Posted in a while, but meh. jetpack, the left side of your b is too fat, get the top bar of the E parallel on both sides, and the s is too fat and too far from the L revid man im feelin it like that, fuck smooth edges... sez, the angle of the y doesnt really fit with the rest of the letters Havn't been sketching as much as i used to but heres one.
i like it czar. i think the 3d is a little too long. fatty close your letters how is it that after 8 months this is all ive developed?. .. View attachment 332190
Why you freakin out dude? All you need to be able to do is nice straight letters to get up doing rad stuff. Paint straight letters, have fun, and remember the dudes you see doing pieces now have been writing for more than a couple years not months.
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yeah, i think i just need to straighten up my M....i like the way it looks....just needs to be a bit more uniform....and i didnt want the O just to be a plain circle, so i tried to do something to it, and the E's.....i dunno
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enak1- Like we tell everyone around here, start with simples and work your way up. remoz- good to see you are sticking with simples. I really like the first one, keep it up.