Aper - yes it gets bigger make em the same size and it will be nice. werst - shits dope viper - do simples chalk - love it
Jawsy tri drawin a verry faint line at the top and the botom of APER and make the highest point of each letter just touch the top line and the lowest point of each letter just touch the bottom line .. (just for practice) i drew this in like 5 seconds but you get the drift
heyyy bulb. your doing your own thing now. haha.. k wel all i have to say is learn how to build ur letters using bars that way they dont come out bulky and different sizes everywhere, know what i mean? like this but it could be alot more simple and they dont have to be so squared. [Broken External Image]:http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/9674/555553532jy7.jpg also check out the new to graffiti thread. there's alot of good tutorials. this is also a good example of using bars.
Ok, we need to get back to if you want to post a picture, you have to crit on the images before. Anyways Bulb - lose extensions add-ons etc until you get your letter structure down better, your all over the place. If you've read any other page in this thread the same thing is said constantly. SIMPLES! Start simple. Jawsy - Although bulb seems to have no perception of letter structure, listen to him about using lines to keep letters the same size. Acereborn - pretty much the same thing i said to bulb applies to you. So read that and use those critz on your own work. MOther Fuckers. Crit if you want crits from now on.
blackbook guy post up some sketches, see, BLACK BOOKS. that is paint. but still looks dece post that in the pictures thread.
http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/9137/ryukoj5.jpg Not usually one for characters but im MADLY IN LOVE WITH DEATH NOTE....so heres my re-indition of Shinigami Death God Ryuk. ENJOI!!
if you can read it good for you haha this is my second time doin this style...ever i sketched it real quick on the bottom of a paper and likely it so did it over and colord it in...with sharpies [Broken External Image]:http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/4485/sed2abspx2.jpg it says sed2 i am aware that: the first s doesnt really flow with the rest of the letters the e has no hole and has to be more defined the d needs to be less "bloblike" and have a larger "arm" so that you can tell its a d... and the 2 needs to be more two-y so, other than that do you guys think this has potential or i should just try something different all together. personally i hink it has potentially to be cool/funky and it could definalty work witha little work edit: forgot crits: wers i love the new throwie keep at it man ayte: the extnesions on the e and a dont really work..also try putting the lower bar on the T a little closer ot the one above it aboz: do some more sketches just in pencil so you can structure your letetrs better (i know mine^ doesnt have a lot of structure its just something new im trying out) but yea you need more structer...also dont try to make connections until youve got nice structure caause it will work so much better