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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. capitol

    capitol Senior Member

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  2. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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  3. the end

    the end Senior Member

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    speedy - lose the quotes,drip marks, and lines.
    focus on making your letters clean and in uniform (which means going back to basic handwriting if you must) from there you can mix it up, but not too much, until youve filled up countless notebooks and have teh hang of it.
     
  4. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    the end - it looks good but reminds me of bigels style.
    cesk - its not too good. You should go to the new to graffiti thread and start over.
    Envar - make the letters all sit next to each other for now and work on the E.
    Jens - I think its time for a more complicated style cause you deffinitely mastered that one.
     
  5. overdue

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  6. 5Funerals

    5Funerals Senior Member

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    work on the mop steez a lot more!

    Speedy - sorry I missed you last time. Way simpler. Literally write your name out neatly with your regular handwriting and then tweak it until it flows and has style.
     
  7. einsamkeit

    einsamkeit Senior Member

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    Oh ... sick D Due... im digin it.
     
  8. einsamkeit

    einsamkeit Senior Member

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  9. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    wasn't there a guy in style wars that wrote that, or something similar.
     
  10. Speedy

    Speedy Senior Member

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    Thanks a lot guys... I'll post another pic after I work on it...
     
  11. Fluffy Bunnies

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  12. lio-d

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    speedy - lose all the fancy stuff, work on your letters
    overdue - not feeling all that space between your letters on the 2nd one. also the U is boring.
    here's mine, still toy, but w/e
    ai258.photobucket.com_albums_hh277_lolque_DSCF4514.jpg
    crits plz
     
  13. mmmburgers

    mmmburgers Elite Member

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    to kils, i like that tag man, but your S is too far away from everything else
    but other than that, its all good
    and lio D, keep it simple, use simple letters, dont make them all boxey
    and keep all the letters the same size
     
  14. Sintakz

    Sintakz Elite Member

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    Lio D, space it out a bit as well, it looks like your name is Micro(the mu sign)od
    Microd..... hmmm, sounds kinda cool in a way. Hows the Sharpie Magnum holding up?
     
  15. lio-d

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    thanks for crits guy i appreciate them :)
     
  16. lio-d

    lio-d Member

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    im working on my next, i hope u guyz will like it xD
     
  17. Sintakz

    Sintakz Elite Member

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    In the end just take our crits with a grain of salt. If you find something you like but we hate, fuck it. Graffiti is about self expression, if you spend your whole life trying to please everyone you aren't expressing yourself, you are expressing everyone else.
     
  18. lio-d

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    lio-d Member

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    nice car picture cerex :)
     
  20. a maze

    a maze Banned

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    dude, refrain from double posting, it makes people HATE you. ;)