i'm feelin that Lope the Top right bar of the T looks a little wierd cause of the connection with the I's dot and the right line on the first L bar is a little wavy compiared to your other bars but thats lookin good.
Thats a fucking hot simple mang. You should try connecting the outlines of your letters with the outlines of the other letters, like such Also try throwing some random bits and doo dads in there, but the force is strong with this one.
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yooo thgis is pretty dope homie the only thin id say is move the D out abit try wat sank said man should be fresh like brocoli
Rank oner: I really like all of that. The best has to be the long straight letter sticker there. Lope: Thats a really awesome simple. I thing it would be better if the fill was a bit more solid. ayte: I like the first one. Only thing is the 3d on the side of the e looks a bit off. I think the angle of the line needs to be more down. The second one is a bit fuzzy. Here's a recent piece I did tell me what you think:
BUMP BUMP BUMP and props to lego for those throws lope a lil generic but good simples synps i think lose the color for now work on the flow
synps, you have structure there, but when you do your little addons and extensions that structure is lost, work on that... your y is your best letter but the top part of it is kind of sketchy... the bar that comes out on the right of it should be higher up and go at the same angle as the bar above and to the left.... work on the S and N
im new here i write alerg heres my throw and two letter tell me what you think [Broken External Image]:http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/8547/alerg002gh8.jpg
awe shit roolete my shit didnt even get buumped!?!? props to that alerg good work as well as the rest of the shit on this page
for once a page with mostly flicks an crits! haha alerg, thats a hot throwie, but im not diggin the swirlies too much. try something else see if it looks better.
heres a couple new dont relly like them after i colored em [Broken External Image]:http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/6436/alerg003jm3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/1445/alerg004qj9.jpg crits please im just starting and want to improve