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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Rank-oner!

    Rank-oner! Senior Member

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    i'm feelin that Lope the Top right bar of the T looks a little wierd cause of the connection with the I's dot and the right line on the first L bar is a little wavy compiared to your other bars but thats lookin good.
     
  2. sank.

    sank. Senior Member

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    Thats a fucking hot simple mang. You should try connecting the outlines of your letters with the outlines of the other letters, like such
    ai106.photobucket.com_albums_m258_si0n_IMG_0879.jpg

    Also try throwing some random bits and doo dads in there, but the force is strong with this one.
     
  3. AyteYourCookies

    AyteYourCookies Senior Member

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  4. Haz-E

    Haz-E Senior Member

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    yooo thgis is pretty dope homie the only thin id say is move the D out abit try wat sank said man should be fresh like brocoli
     
  5. synps

    synps Senior Member

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    Rank oner: I really like all of that. The best has to be the long straight letter sticker there.
    Lope: Thats a really awesome simple. I thing it would be better if the fill was a bit more solid.
    ayte: I like the first one. Only thing is the 3d on the side of the e looks a bit off. I think the angle of the line needs to be more down. The second one is a bit fuzzy.

    Here's a recent piece I did tell me what you think:
    ai237.photobucket.com_albums_ff263_synapsestickerups_syn001.jpg
     
  6. STES

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  7. Roolete

    Roolete Elite Member

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    BUMP BUMP BUMP
    and props to lego for those throws
    lope a lil generic but good simples
    synps i think lose the color for now work on the flow
     
  8. mind.or.matter

    mind.or.matter Senior Member

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    synps, you have structure there, but when you do your little addons and extensions that structure is lost, work on that...
    your y is your best letter but the top part of it is kind of sketchy... the bar that comes out on the right of it should be higher up and go at the same angle as the bar above and to the left....
    work on the S and N
     
  9. alergeeeezz

    alergeeeezz Member

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  10. kase121

    kase121 Senior Member

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    ai65.photobucket.com_albums_h239_kase121_802.jpg

    might add cracks in the 802 dont know though
     
  11. alergeeeezz

    alergeeeezz Member

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    that looks pretty clean and good man
     
  12. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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    awe shit roolete my shit didnt even get buumped!?!?:(
    props to that alerg
    good work as well as the rest of the shit on this page
     
  13. T O K E

    T O K E Elite Member

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  14. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    for once a page with mostly flicks an crits! haha

    alerg, thats a hot throwie, but im not diggin the swirlies too much. try something else see if it looks better.
     
  15. kase121

    kase121 Senior Member

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    bump to a new page, crits?
     
  16. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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    looks clean man, would have looked better with some 3d or some ish o well
     
  17. Sintakz

    Sintakz Elite Member

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    A LOT better. Goes to show you how much simple bars help someone.
     
  18. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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  19. alergeeeezz

    alergeeeezz Member

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  20. kase121

    kase121 Senior Member

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    i like the b but i dont really like the bottom of the r, it doesnt seem to fit i dont know though