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uhh I haven't been on here in a while, and I've never been in the toy blackbook thread Keane-your shit's always lookin fresh Raby- the shadowing...
clout, it's YOUR fucking style, people are just give their crits about how they would change it, but that doesn't mean you neccessarily need to...
OENE- want to do an exchange? I write SAME. I was just interested in trying to do your name in a oneliner....
Bump! Same 2 page BA BUMB BA BUMP!
oene-lookin nice man, def post it up around town i've posted a couple round town, it feels so good! so fuckin fun well new word and lettering...
i think everyone should just shut up about this whole hip hop and graff shit and just WRITE!!!! but that's just what I think you wanna know more...
woe-the E reminds me of some clockwork orange shit, like alex's mask. what i mean is don't extend the middle too far out... septa-just keep on...
noxi- try a rounded loop on the P, maybe that will help. It will make it flow a bit better too. also on the first one, fix the a so that the top...
Lasic- fresh shit mang ARKO-uh shit man, make it real simple, almost like regular print. look at your key board and copy the letters how they are...
Cosmic- give crits to get crits yarbles-thanks, i appreciate it, it's nice to know my shit's comin around
suspek- dope ass gold tag, really diggin that first one Taste- sick style shim- when you post, put the name up as well, im guessing it's BRAINE?...
yarbles- fresh shit, not diggin the quotes tho, but tht's just me, i also can't read it, but im new and toy as fuck so really, what do i know?...
SKER new word [attach] crits?
the "R" isn't so bad, but i think you should fix the sizes just a tad. the first "S" just seems like it's too big the "S" on the "MSR" tho is...
you're WAY over doing EVERYTHING start from scratch with very simple letters we all know we all want to advance quickly but rushing it is...
so here's the simplified Modes [attach] crits?
the "S" is a little out of control, work on a different "e" and just work with new ideas, write it over and over til it flows a bit better
nice and simple start, but the letters seem to be too close, I have to agree that the "R" does look like a "P" and the "T" does look like an "L"...
toy shit some pretty toy shit but im just startin out writing. I think it's been 15 days? anyways, comment on the shit, tell me what you think....
will do pie
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