Im stuck at the same place I feel like I got simples down but I dont know how to expand on em without lookin like shit any tips??

 

a couple new ones:

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disregard the blobs i was bored

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crits welcome

 

bump for feedback

 

go put it up??

 

thats more of a throw than a simple

 

any crits im just startin

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mach go back to block letters

 

mach chill on the arrows homie

your last one is the best keep it simple for a while and then start tweaking and adding extentions

and any crits on mine on the top of the page?

 

Tricks Through The Ages

Speckz : when i was myabe...13 :

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"ms.skillz" for a girl...13 still

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"statick" when i was maybe...14

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"regs era" when i was 15

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and now...my Regs, Smirk...and now...what i write...WHAM era

im 16 years old in case anyone wanted to know too.

lol
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Keep It Simple Stupid!

Peace

 

dont know why stuff posted twice...oh well..sorry

 

i still think ur awesome i wish i had ur talent...........

 

damn that make me wanna stick with graff thanx

peace

 

yo anymo crits on my shit up mo
any suggestions?

 

im not that good on paper, i tried to get the fundamentals down, then i went to walls

the structure isnt all that bad tho...the only thing i wish i had done with it is made the handstyle thicker

but thats my style, i like that stretched out futuristic wild shit [/b][/quote]
futuristic style? I dont think you have the fundamentals down at all. Stay off the walls for now and go back to simpler structures, cuz no offence but its wack.






Tricks ive only got one crit for you and that is to start experimenting, one style is sick and i think youve got it down hardout, but things are starting to get repetitive, like that 3D effect, i would really like to see you experimenting with different structures and styles because i think you are well capable at this point in your progression.

 

crit eye sis em?

 

tricks- That post was awesome. Very inspirational. Props as always yo.

That's hot too MF....

 

aint feelin the M, everything else is hot, not really feelin the nwk either, or well, just the k, love the D C and S, E is ok, M needs some work in my eyes

Peace

 

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first time tryin out the 3d stuff crits? and my letters i need to work on tht too lol

 

crit eye sis em? [/b][/quote]
thats nice, that for a battle?