nemz or jar down to exchange? msg me

 

Jar5..hot shit...but not really feeling the middle part of the A..but the J and R are just..hot

sevewon...sorry can't really read it...bubbles don't really look balanced over the whole piece though

equinox...I would loose the little extension thingy on the back of the e and I think youre x looks like a better N then Youre N...I would use it as an N and fiddle around with it a bit till it looks like an X aswell

BSK...
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critz??

 

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Any Crits would be Appreciated, sorry for the low quality pic but it was usin my phone early in the mornin

 

That stlye is odl skool... looks ok

 

Thats what I was goin For I kno I forgot some 3d on the bottom of the R and some sketchy lines for the S just need some over all crits

 

i like this a lot, only two things about it that kind of bug me:
the left side of the N, seems too skinny or something. out of place
the 3D just doesnt do it for me, i dont think a center vanishing point was a good choice, 3D down would have been better. there just isnt enough 3D in there to make it... well look 3D i guess [/b][/quote]
It kinda... not really but kinda loses it's style after the N

 

i like the sonar one... it reminds me of that ill northeastern style.

 

Loose all that bullshit round the letters and make the S in size with the other letters...
Fair deal.

 

Mine?

 

Lookin for some crits. Submission for the Sketch Battle. Reads SKRE.

Sonar: Nice work, except the N is a bit screwed up.
Menance: Nice style, but not really liking your fill... Seems too sloppy to me.
BSK: Im liking the second one a lot. Not much i can say about the first one though. Maybe color in ur 3D.

 

thanx for the critz man...the 3d is colored though..a really light grey

I normally don't really like pointy lettershapes...but I dunno I comes out ok with yours....from a artisic view I like it. from a writers point of view I would say..loose the points in the letters and the arrow on the side

 

Back that up Qlown Diggin The Fill think you just need some letter structure. I kno my shit was mad sloppy I wanted to fade but it was a bitch I have no blenders

 

CT born n raised.
philly now though.

 

i really like ur style bro but in just not feeling that A. :lol:

 

jar, i like ur style 2, like the A just not the wee arrow. you, me , exchange?!

 

JAR5, coming fresh as usual. Dude, I really dig that, even the A. It works for the piece, in my mind.

 

I'm home from college for fall break, and I was looking through my room and found this. I did this In late July or early August... can't remember which.



What do you guys think?

 

i like it. it would work great for an irish writer. could easily be made in2 a clover!

 

:lol: