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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.
dont use any. use a new piece of paper, penil and SIMPLE BLOCK letters!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111
one word: simples
not exactly sure what u mean...im still learning the graffiti slang haha
pencil = contraption u write with
paper = paper lol
simples are just normal letter with no funk
lol alrighttt i got that i just didnt get what u meant by simples.... this is another one i did
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Here is my toy attempt at a one liner. Yes i know that it isn't all connecting but just look at it as if it was all connected. I got lazy with the pen.
bezerk - look at your keyboard. Do simple letters like that. Not all those jagged edges. just plain BLOCK letters. That's what they mean by simples.
well toxik....it doesnt look so good...at all since you were lazy n all, and are you writing "few"?
Bezerk dude do as toxik said Simple blocks or straight letter don't do ANY pointed stuff just make your corners smoother or rounder.
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lose the ribbon on the a maybe.
Like Red said, lose the ribbon thing, and lose the connection between the N and the I. Also I think you should define the N more, just make that top middle line go down a little more or something. Other than that, its lookin pretty good.
Enigma right ok first man it looks ok ,Don't make it to crusty ,and clean it up alot. Also DONT connect the N and the I it looks like an M with a dot at the top. Your M needs some work and the G looks pretty simpler than the rest of the letters and the A is too complex for the rest of your letters, your N needs some work it looks almost like a H. Overall leave some space between the letters and do something a little more simpler , straight letters or blocks cause that looks odd. Your tag is good...
critz on new throw please...
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You got a better pic, boswer? It's kinda hard to see.
Post this in the sticker section, but thought I'd do it here to:
New character and piece stickers from me
Simple Block letters my friend.
terower your character reminds me of Carrot Top.
Terorwer, I'm not really feeling your characters other than the in the middle on the bottom(does that make sense?). Just keep developing.
theres my attempt at simpler, block letters... what can i improve on or do differently?
stikie for CEAR, squished and stuff cuz im stoopid like that . . .
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exactly like that. nothing else.
Bezerk: These are examples of simples. This is what you should be workin on. Especially the top 3 first. Does it help?
Terrower: I like the pieces, altough the characters dont really appeal to me. They look too plain... You need something in there that defines it i guess.
Sky5: Yeah... it is squished. You can see the R going off the page lol. Other than that, nice color scheme. Maybe you could have used a darker color for the background.
Could i get more critiques on this piece? I really like this style, just want to see if you guys feel the same.
lmfao no SHARP edges either bezerk. And it doesnt looks like your accually feeling your sketchs man another thing is don't rush.
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