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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. nemzone

    nemzone Elite Member

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    dont use any. use a new piece of paper, penil and SIMPLE BLOCK letters!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111
     
  2. -GEKS-

    -GEKS- Elite Member

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    one word: simples
     
  3. bezerk

    bezerk Member

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    not exactly sure what u mean...im still learning the graffiti slang haha
     
  4. nemzone

    nemzone Elite Member

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    pencil = contraption u write with

    paper = paper lol

    simples are just normal letter with no funk
     
  5. bezerk

    bezerk Member

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    lol alrighttt i got that i just didnt get what u meant by simples.... this is another one i did
    ai14.tinypic.com_2q19anq.jpg
     
  6. ToXiK

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    [Broken External Image]:http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c221/bboystillin/FewThrowie.jpg

    Here is my toy attempt at a one liner. Yes i know that it isn't all connecting but just look at it as if it was all connected. I got lazy with the pen.

    bezerk - look at your keyboard. Do simple letters like that. Not all those jagged edges. just plain BLOCK letters. That's what they mean by simples.
     
  7. poopis

    poopis Senior Member

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    well toxik....it doesnt look so good...at all since you were lazy n all, and are you writing "few"?

    Bezerk dude do as toxik said Simple blocks or straight letter don't do ANY pointed stuff just make your corners smoother or rounder.
     
  8. enigmatic

    enigmatic Senior Member

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  9. Red3

    Red3 Senior Member

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    lose the ribbon on the a maybe.
     
  10. kore

    kore Senior Member

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    Like Red said, lose the ribbon thing, and lose the connection between the N and the I. Also I think you should define the N more, just make that top middle line go down a little more or something. Other than that, its lookin pretty good.
     
  11. poopis

    poopis Senior Member

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    Enigma right ok first man it looks ok ,Don't make it to crusty ,and clean it up alot. Also DONT connect the N and the I it looks like an M with a dot at the top. Your M needs some work and the G looks pretty simpler than the rest of the letters and the A is too complex for the rest of your letters, your N needs some work it looks almost like a H. Overall leave some space between the letters and do something a little more simpler , straight letters or blocks cause that looks odd. Your tag is good...
     
  12. Bowser

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  13. terower

    terower Senior Member

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    You got a better pic, boswer? It's kinda hard to see.

    Post this in the sticker section, but thought I'd do it here to:
    New character and piece stickers from me
    ai61.photobucket.com_albums_h56_terower_DSCF3610.jpg
     
  14. Fixion

    Fixion Senior Member

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    Eww.
    Simple Block letters my friend.



    terower your character reminds me of Carrot Top.
     
  15. Hot_Pocket

    Hot_Pocket Senior Member

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    Terorwer, I'm not really feeling your characters other than the in the middle on the bottom(does that make sense?). Just keep developing.
     
  16. bezerk

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    ai13.tinypic.com_4gxs6zt.jpg

    theres my attempt at simpler, block letters... what can i improve on or do differently?
     
  17. sky 5

    sky 5 Elite Member

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  18. Necro-

    Necro- Senior Member

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    draw this

    BEZERK

    exactly like that. nothing else.
     
  19. Qlown

    Qlown Senior Member

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    atn3_2.deviantart.com_fs12_300W_i_2006_297_c_7_Block_Simples_by_Qlown.jpg
    atn3_2.deviantart.com_fs12_300W_i_2006_295_7_f_Kurupt_Exchange_by_Qlown.jpg

    Bezerk: These are examples of simples. This is what you should be workin on. Especially the top 3 first. Does it help?

    Terrower: I like the pieces, altough the characters dont really appeal to me. They look too plain... You need something in there that defines it i guess.

    Sky5: Yeah... it is squished. You can see the R going off the page lol. Other than that, nice color scheme. Maybe you could have used a darker color for the background.

    atn3_1.deviantart.com_fs12_300W_i_2006_290_1_2_BLOW_by_Qlown.jpg

    Could i get more critiques on this piece? I really like this style, just want to see if you guys feel the same.
     
  20. poopis

    poopis Senior Member

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    lmfao no SHARP edges either bezerk. And it doesnt looks like your accually feeling your sketchs man another thing is don't rush.