before i say this, i by no means consider myself any better then anyone here...but somethin i notice with all the flix on this thread is that everyone here seems to spend more time coloring their pieces then bothering to develop their style. the amount of time some of you guys spend coloring a whack piece is wasted, you could have done 5 single color or hollow pieces that will help you develop your style and structure. dont get me wrong, color is very imporant, but not nearly as important as your letters...unless you plan on putting these pieces up (i hope not...yet), then just stick to working out your letters! whats every response to someones plea for "crits"??? "work on your letters".....because thats what you gotta do!!!
soze lose the arrows on your pieces, the throwups are decent but teeth are played out..you execute it pretty well though that characters pretty fresh, very actually, keep that shit up shitty throw, im out to get drunk [Broken External Image]:http://img314.imageshack.us/img314/1305/awxf5.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/9011/enox4id7.jpg did a nice simple thing, critz on it plz?
[Broken External Image]:http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/2193/10312006051843pmmv3.png havent sketched in like 2 months...since this got deleted from the other one ill post it here, did it in history learning bout the panic of 1893(year?) so yea here ya go....panyk
[Broken External Image]:http://img280.imageshack.us/img280/9016/10312006071852pmec7.png colored now...idk if i like it better before or now. colored with just some shitty colored pens [Broken External Image]:http://img424.imageshack.us/img424/3936/10292006011840pmno9.png got the monkey from someone on bs's sig [Broken External Image]:http://img286.imageshack.us/img286/5441/09062006090536pmmk5.png just some random shit^
nice antic. a pic i jsut made.... [Broken External Image]:http://img406.imageshack.us/img406/4035/cci00062ql9.jpg you know the deal. crit it.
krynsum was that for the sketch battle for halloween? its pretty cool this is one of my first somewhat decent pieces and any crits on it and dont be gay and say shit that aint constructive sorry bout shitty pic quality i need a scanner by the way it sez Zach [Broken External Image]:http://i35.photobucket.com/albums/d176/zrisyourfriend/ZachsGraffiti-1.jpg
Try completely changing around the letters then making your own way of doing them. Glad to see you did actually change em this time =)
[Broken External Image]:http://img273.imageshack.us/img273/4024/sdfsdfasfnr9.png I numbered it this time~ Like I said before I got no clue what I'm doin, please give me some tips to make it better
#2 looks ok except for the U. all the rest are either spaced out too much and crooked, or just not the same style. and work on gettin them to flow. thats a big thing.
I'm liking the Goodfella's monkey. After much erasing and redrawing, I settled on an R. I also resized the O and I think I may have distorted it a bit (the "O" ... in a bad way). [Broken External Image]:http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/4148/dscf1746nz5.th.jpg