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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. smokincron

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  5. Vagrant

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    "Post your pieces with too many arrows"

    I don't think this is too many arrows but we'll see what ya'll thing.
    No i do not have any decent markers. This was done in colored pencil.
    Crit please

    ai117.photobucket.com_albums_o75_VagrantGraf_Rant_Throw_Arrows_Bubblefill.jpg
     
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    vagrant
    where you stay at?
     
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  9. Vagrant

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    I really dont like to bump my own stuff, but id really like to get a crit, even if its just being told its wack as hell + a reason..... :unsure: [/b][/quote]
    if you are going to fill in the e hole, then fill in the o hole. the titties in the x are fucked up. having single chips on the left, but doubles on the right looks odd, i understand its because of the shape of the letters but it just doesnt look right. work on the shadow.
    perhaps drop the division of the loop and tail of the e down so it has a larger loop, this being so it matches the N better because of where you end the lines inside the N.
    Hope this constructive crit wasnt too harsh. frankly i dont think its harsh at all.

    hit me back with a crit?
     
  10. Equinox

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    thx, and not harsh at all, dont gotta worry bout hurting my feelings.
    i want to learn, only way im going to learn is if i get a idea of what im doing wrong.

    edit: by the way, good advice i see how that would clean that up.
     
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    Sky5? You have me blinking here.

    ENOX: To me, your X is thin on one side and fat on teh other, which looks kinda odd. And you should have all your holes filled in black if you did it for one.

    Vagrant: I'd say lose the arrows altogether. Just my opinion though. Your fill looks good, would be pretty dope if done with proper markers like prismas.

    Im gonna be posting soon, be sure to hit me back.
     
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    Bump for crits...
     
  16. sky 5

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    yeah im sittin here hands covered in paint, my boy just draged me off the parking lot so fuck yall . . .
     
  17. Qlown

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    Nice one Ase. Maybe you could lose that arrow on the far right. Pther than that, it's doppe. Would love to see that colored!
     
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  19. Qlown

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    Im still confused... Go easier on the slang.
     
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