Dub Im Still Pretty toy but im not diggin the character

 

did anyone ever tell u how cool u were?

 

the U needs to be less rounded. looks like a O with a gap at the top. but still needs to all be balanced. and try to work on overall flow too..

 

comments or critz?
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3-d is off in some places on the S and in the bottom right part of the "R"

 

That "R" is a "B".LOL

 

Bes one....lyk everyone says on this toy forum...start off with simples...its been helping me so far :lol:

 

not quite

next time you try to be cool

















dont!

 

nvmd i am tlkaing about the E then...
looks like BRS though

 

critz???

 

wild practice making your letters all the same size the B in the top one and the top t in the second one look outta place keep practicing those simples dude

ive been messing with 3d

Enso
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sone
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crits?

 

sick i love the firts one

 

i got respect for ppl who do 3D shit, i don't understand it too well but it looks pretty good to me, i just dont like the green add-ons and what not in the one that says sone.

 

get more geometric, dont try curves yet. as always, practice more on the letters than spending time coloring.

 

if thts suppose to be toy...

 

what did u use to color that? it looks sick as fuck to me, good job.

 

black biro shading, then markers over the top cheers guys

-neza

 

i like it [/b][/quote]
lol really? thanks man. anyone think i gotta do somethin to improve on it?

 

somethings i did.
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worked on what i was trying befor, i know the 3D abouve the e looks a bit weird.

and something new.
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critz?