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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. alive

    alive Banned

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    this should be an example for all of you. this is the way to sketch. BARS. BARS. BARS. then round the edges. get it through your heads.

    shoulda brought ur T lower man. i wouldnt have put so much of the S behind the A, and when u did ur outline, you missed some roundness, like in the R, the edge got real hard. and the second leg of the R is too big. dont warp the top of the T so much when u didnt do it on any other letter. ur missing 3d in on the A. mostly just details man. good job.

    peace.
     
  2. Apoc

    Apoc Elite Member

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    not quite

    next time you try to be cool

















    dont! [/b][/quote]
    look, ass...

    I accidently double posted, and edited it. So stop trying to be cool.
     
  3. ras

    ras Banned

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    Crits and Comments pleeease
     
  4. DJLotus

    DJLotus Senior Member

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  5. anilizer

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    Ras - I like everything but the character, he looks like he got squished. Work more on the character. Also, make his sleeves the same size. I'm also not feeling that arrow on the b also, it makes it look like a deformed w. But this is all IMO.
     
  6. anilizer

    anilizer Member

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    DJlotus - the shines are in the wrong spaces, they should be opposite your 3D.
     
  7. ras

    ras Banned

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    the karak is supposed to look like hes nealing down sayin...check out the rims .. lol ...
     
  8. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    the karak is supposed to look like hes nealing down sayin...check out the rims .. lol ... [/b][/quote]
    ... he looks like a bowlegged midget.

    Take a picture of someone in that actual pose so you have a better reference when you draw it. The heels might need to go together a little bit, and work on trying to make the legs look like they are bent at the knees and he's sitting on his heels or something.
    Sketch sketch sketch. You'll get a better looking carak
     
  9. neza

    neza Senior Member

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  10. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    ^^
    I love the tag... but make it look more clean and crisp. Looks like you did it with pencil crayon
    but work on the shaddow

    I give that 7/10
     
  11. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    ai117.photobucket.com_albums_o75_VagrantGraf_Rant_Bubblesfill.jpg

    Sharpie and pencil. I have a few others with bubbles but I like this one because its not colored.

    ai117.photobucket.com_albums_o75_VagrantGraf_Rant_Comicbookish.jpg
    I did this one a while ago, the pencil is getting smudged from rubbing on the page above it. I should probably ink over this and erase the pencil so it looks better and lasts.

    ~~

    Neza your tag style is money. Do you have any more tags you could post in the tag thread?
     
  12. neza

    neza Senior Member

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    ill write a few up n scan em l8r
     
  13. Fosale!

    Fosale! Elite Member

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    on second pic if you had left the line out of the middle and just kept it in the A this would have been hot
     
  14. P!P

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  15. Fosale!

    Fosale! Elite Member

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    its not that good.
    the structure isnt as good as it could be and black shadow ruins the color
     
  16. Vagrant

    Vagrant Elite Member

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    we have no idea who you are talking about
     
  17. Fosale!

    Fosale! Elite Member

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    i was obviously talking abt the neza sketch that pip bumped.
    my post was right under pip's saying that neza's was burnin' hot.

    well, at least i thought it was obvious to whom i was referring...
     
  18. P!P

    P!P Senior Member

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    i dont mind the dull colors. if he wanted it bright like he would've used highlighters,...
    but, I dont know about 3-d stuff and have mad respect for naybody who cna manage that shit..
     
  19. d_g

    d_g Elite Member

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    this should be an example for all of you. this is the way to sketch. BARS. BARS. BARS. then round the edges. get it through your heads.

    shoulda brought ur T lower man. i wouldnt have put so much of the S behind the A, and when u did ur outline, you missed some roundness, like in the R, the edge got real hard. and the second leg of the R is too big. dont warp the top of the T so much when u didnt do it on any other letter. ur missing 3d in on the A. mostly just details man. good job.

    peace. [/b][/quote]
    Cheers for giving useful comments dude.

    I don't think I'm missing 3-d on the A, cause the vanishing point is above the 'hole' in the 'A', but yeah, it kind looks wierd having no 3d there, I need to get the hang of the vanishing point thing.
     
  20. krazzie_ammo

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