this should be an example for all of you. this is the way to sketch. BARS. BARS. BARS. then round the edges. get it through your heads. shoulda brought ur T lower man. i wouldnt have put so much of the S behind the A, and when u did ur outline, you missed some roundness, like in the R, the edge got real hard. and the second leg of the R is too big. dont warp the top of the T so much when u didnt do it on any other letter. ur missing 3d in on the A. mostly just details man. good job. peace.
not quite next time you try to be cool dont! [/b][/quote] look, ass... I accidently double posted, and edited it. So stop trying to be cool.
[Broken External Image]:http://img216.imageshack.us/img216/4256/1031061322km6.jpg What you guys think? Did it in about 15 minutes in Music Theory class. (((I know its not very good at all but some crits would be nice)
Ras - I like everything but the character, he looks like he got squished. Work more on the character. Also, make his sleeves the same size. I'm also not feeling that arrow on the b also, it makes it look like a deformed w. But this is all IMO.
the karak is supposed to look like hes nealing down sayin...check out the rims .. lol ... [/b][/quote] ... he looks like a bowlegged midget. Take a picture of someone in that actual pose so you have a better reference when you draw it. The heels might need to go together a little bit, and work on trying to make the legs look like they are bent at the knees and he's sitting on his heels or something. Sketch sketch sketch. You'll get a better looking carak
^^ I love the tag... but make it look more clean and crisp. Looks like you did it with pencil crayon but work on the shaddow I give that 7/10
Sharpie and pencil. I have a few others with bubbles but I like this one because its not colored. I did this one a while ago, the pencil is getting smudged from rubbing on the page above it. I should probably ink over this and erase the pencil so it looks better and lasts. ~~ Neza your tag style is money. Do you have any more tags you could post in the tag thread?
on second pic if you had left the line out of the middle and just kept it in the A this would have been hot
i was obviously talking abt the neza sketch that pip bumped. my post was right under pip's saying that neza's was burnin' hot. well, at least i thought it was obvious to whom i was referring...
i dont mind the dull colors. if he wanted it bright like he would've used highlighters,... but, I dont know about 3-d stuff and have mad respect for naybody who cna manage that shit..
this should be an example for all of you. this is the way to sketch. BARS. BARS. BARS. then round the edges. get it through your heads. shoulda brought ur T lower man. i wouldnt have put so much of the S behind the A, and when u did ur outline, you missed some roundness, like in the R, the edge got real hard. and the second leg of the R is too big. dont warp the top of the T so much when u didnt do it on any other letter. ur missing 3d in on the A. mostly just details man. good job. peace. [/b][/quote] Cheers for giving useful comments dude. I don't think I'm missing 3-d on the A, cause the vanishing point is above the 'hole' in the 'A', but yeah, it kind looks wierd having no 3d there, I need to get the hang of the vanishing point thing.
check this....another pen freestyleeee [Broken External Image]:http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/4037/45bk7.jpg crits?