truth that grip is sweet man. looks clean as shit.

and yeah fube i scanned something once as a text document and i looked exacly like that.

 

Criticism please.

 

Whoa Quigbert, that first one is hot.

 

Cwazy - Ew on that 2nd one, I am not feeling the arrows inside the letters, except for the one on the top of the Z. On the 4th one I can't see the Y.

 

any comments/crti at all?

 

Put in Character page thread.

 

ayt
i been working on my simples and worked hard on them so now trying to add a bit of style. what you rekon woth adding colour ?


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peace.

 

it would look better if they all were the same size

 

can you guys tell me what you think. this is all i did the whole week. Been workin on my handie.
About to go waste a couple cans around town. but how do you like it?

 

i was trying to make em gradually bigger startin with a smallest m largest u not rekon tis gd idea, i kno thers like a rule bout keepin em the same size but im tryin 2 switch ma style up,

cheers for the critz

 

^^^ if youre gonna do that, squish em together more and make it a little more noticeable that youre trying to do that, the letters are decent, not really feelin the m

p!p the e is ok the p is retarded, go simpler with the p, the r looks like its trying too hard, the o is alright and theres not much you can do to an x without making it look stupid. make all your letters the same size, write em quicker, dont try too hard. get rid of the underline because in my opinion that sorta makes everything look toy, no offense, just trying to help.

 

thanks...look at the toy tags thread please. i have a few other pages i need commented on.

 

yeh furious + apoc cheers for takin the time to crit man i been posting on the 12 oz prophet site and they dont ever say anythin.

pip bro we all been at that stage mate itll come jus practice everyday get some flow going on and youll be sorted

peace

 

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my D was too fat but I thought everything else was alright

 

DFACE, do you do trains, I seen a train the other day that had D-FACE on it.

 

nope, where do you live?

 

well I guess it doesn't matter where you live anyway because it is a train, it could have been from any city

 

Yeha i did over 1,000 handies in the past 2 days. But check out the TOY TAGZ thread. i need some comments on those ones there too. i have like 4 pages up there.
its All progress....been writing for less than i month. not a lot of painting yet