Do you write DOA as your tag? Cuzz DOA is my crew... I'm not the bitchin type, so if it's your tag, you're all fine and dandy, but if it's a crew, you should put those initials to rest. We aren't accepting new mambers right now. [/b][/quote]
its my name...its not pronounced D . O . A its pronunced DOAH like that lol .... shud i change it AGAIN :huh:


ima change it anyway ... ATEW OR .... ATEL ... i hope that motherfucker aint taken ! h34r: :angry:

 

NEAR - your throw is so fresh! and your letters are good, keep it up man, busting out that wildstyle in no time

heres something i did for nemz, needs colouring though.
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generally speaking 2 and 3 letter words are usually crew names especially if its not like an actual word u knoow like 3 letters beside eachother

 

Trying out something new
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sh1ft. buddy. i like your entry. but i think the 3d on the p, e's, and the a are messed up a little bit. im talkin bout the inside part. like where they all have a circle on the inside. unless thats how u want it...have u submited yet?

 

ak? - daym boy, get back to simples. not much crits that i can give other than that.

 

dope dope. exchange?

 

Yeah...that near stuff is shit hot ! ..

peeta is kool too...those ink lines at the back for me look like a kinda kool 3d lmfao...lol

new name...ATEL...did sum simples erlier and i just done this ...

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crits and comments on it please ...

thanks yall !!

 

ATEL - dam, thats hype.loving the letters and karak.

 

thanks man...i think its great now u got yah own stlye mate...but like i sed b4...the bars goin DOWN on the E look off...cuz the rest of the bars on the E are going horizontal...if you can fix that...ur shit would great ! and i really like that M sooo different frum whut i seen..

i asked before but dint getany replies ..

cud sum1 name me a few young new writers that are dope please...i dont know any other writers apart from the legends lol :blink: ?

please..

thanks !

 

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Can I get some constructive critz?

You can click on the picture to resize it.

 

ras: i've always loved all your shit with all your names. that's a dope ass karak.

 

Terst - cant really see it, try enlarging that up!

Ras - ermm....i really dont know the ages of them but check out http://www.robotswillkill.com/graffiti/ they have a massive list of names with pics.

BUMP because I was at the bottom of the page.

 

meh.....you letter structer needs work

 

bump cuz i was at the bottom of the page

again

Terst...all i can say us go simpler ... it looks good from far away but when u get close u can see its flaws

oh and kore...thanks man


CRITS CRITS CRITS YAAAALLL

 

need to work on ya person. stuture in the arms, it needs a shoulder, top part of ya arm is to short and the bottom is too long...

 

I like the coloring job. But yeah work on that person.

 

i made the arms and hands big for the cartoon effect...and his mouth blocks out the shoulders..

what about the peice anyway ..the letters and structure....that what im workin hardest on ?

thanks

 

ATEL - like the AT not so much the EL. if its a new name work on your tag first.

coloured the NEMZ piece in, scanner kinda dampened the colour though.
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