[Broken External Image]:http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/2987/newgraf2fkr0.jpg what does anyone think..? one of my 1st sketches for this name...criticism and comments welcome...aswell as any ideas?
Yo....that craze 3d is tiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight trash....the thing being done on computer puts it off for me .... good peice tho...and that karak...lose it ....it looks like a head floting above your workk...good job tho... tried ATEW cuz i hated the L did a few simples and then i added this fill and a arrow.. [Broken External Image]:http://img120.imageshack.us/img120/3163/atew1je3.jpg crits crits crits please..? thankssss aaah....brand new page :lol: hehe
ATEW - nahh man! not really feeling this one, get rid of that arrow. btw, when im filling in a piece i get darker areas where i have gone over the lines. how do i stop this?
crazzie, u took graphic comm right? they should teach u colourin in that?? what i do is outline all the block of the colour im using, then colour in single line strokes all the way thru. looks nice and dont waster ur pens
haha, we dont learn anything in graphics. we havent even started our coursework. our teacher is such a douché, like an older tony blair, cant control the class. thanks for the tip
i posted these b4...but which style u think is better .. [Broken External Image]:http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/6551/atel2jp0.jpg that or this .. [Broken External Image]:http://img389.imageshack.us/img389/2223/atelne2.jpg thanks...
amen, i got a little progression BAWK commin up for ya, well its not really progression at all, jsut without 3D and the with it, but illt be up soon ras go with that simple, build on that hutz too squiggly, get some better definition, the simple letters are there though wolfburns, thats too shaky, and anything shaded half ass in penicl looks bad, so try using pen fluffy bunnies keep it up, its looking nice and simple Peace
Ras: The fill from the first is dope, but the style of the second is way, way hotter than the first. The little E disrupts the flow more than anything else, and as much as it makes it unique it hurts the thing overall. About the second though, I'd say shorten the E a little so the gap between the E and the L isn't so huge, it looks just a shade too big. Also, don't bump your shit like three times in a single page, that's just fucking unnecessary and all it does is makes people want to crit you less. Fluffy: I like it mang, real simple, but when a name's that short you really gotta pay attention to scale, because the negative spaces are off. Look at the hole in the O and the gap under the K, they gotta be closer in size so it looks more unified, good shit though. Wolf: 3d's off, especially on the S. Nice and simple though, which is where most of us need to be right now. Forget the bump on the L and work on the E, make sure you really keep all the letters in the same sort of style. If you're going with bubble, go with bubble, if you're going with simple, go with simple. At this point, don't try really incorporating both. Notice how your E is almost all curves and your S is almost all straights? Try to keep it together and keep it simple. That's all I can see in my reply window right now, so those are all the crits I'm going to give. Also, as a note: I know I'm not too good a writer yet, I'm still a total toy, but I'm just calling this stuff as I see it. I'm a terribly analytical guy and I like trying to provide constructive crits so I can see people improve. I hope I'm helping at least some people.
good crits^ And as i promised: [Broken External Image]:http://img153.imageshack.us/img153/4175/bawkpenre7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img147.imageshack.us/img147/7990/bawkpen3dhz1.jpg my fills kinda suck ass, but i might try one later tonight, crits? Peace