tricks u down for an exchange??

 

kind of old i wanted to enter it into the halloween battle but was to lazy

critz.....

 

thought you said my shit was half assed nemz ? hehe, yeah that near sketch was BAD BAD BAD, but whatever, ummmm yeah im down but i couldnt do yours for a while, i got once for aces first, and i like to sketch my own name now and then as you can tell

 

krupt make your pictures smaller and for GODSAKE take time on your lines, look at how shaky it all is, make your letters the same size, and in a line, dont worry about colour, and make the simple, and straight

Peace

 

thanks for the crits people...

late night shit...after reading LSsmiths comments...ill lose the E...i loved it soo much ... is there anyway i could make it not distrupt the peice..? thanks

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crits plaese...

 

try a diffrent color 3d and do a force feild thing thin but yeah that looks ill

 

ras, ur tryin to hard buddy. just do simple letters til u get ur proportions rite, and a good grasp on lettering. then try complesed shiz...

and tricks yeh theres no hurry lol

 

Alright, little progression, yall know

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crits?

 

you're gettin there

 

bump

 

NECRO - i see a MAU.....am i right? loving your style. no real crits i can give.

 

necro, quit bumping your own shit without giving crits, linkz, something other than "your getting there" to me would be appropraite and helpful

necro i personally hate the style, but you seem to execute it decently, keep going at it i guess, i ahve no way of giving you help because there are no legible letters there

 

bottom of page bump?

 

its mav

 

necro your style as fresh as it is lacks letter structure work on you letter structure and try to make them more defined other than the fact i know u write maven (mav) i wouldnt be able to tell what it said

neza

 

Ras - I like the style with the charactor. That looks good.

Necro - Your shit is hot but I cant read it at all. Like Neza said, if I didnt know what it said I couldnt be able to read it.

 

wow thats one gangster charac hahahha

 

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mate this is rele nice, i duno wat u guys r chattn about structure no offence.
in this case i think structure can be excused due to orginality