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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    thanks for the crits. the fill was kind of an expierment. and the handy i usually do a lot better.
     
  2. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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    Very nice, just make the O a bit smaller.
     
  3. capo93

    capo93 Senior Member

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    i like it, just work on the S and the R. [/b][/quote]
    i sorta like the s but the r defintley needs some work
     
  4. Torrent

    Torrent Senior Member

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    i sorta like the s but the r defintley needs some work [/b][/quote]
    Thanks for the critique. I really fucked up on the R. I was doing the black outline on it and I saw how bad it was.
     
  5. trashhh

    trashhh Elite Member

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  6. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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    Trash, that is soo dope.
    The fill is ridiculous, it looks like it was done on a computer.
     
  7. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    bump.. i agree now the face doesnt really fit in [/b][/quote]
    holy damn dude, that fill is insane, i love it. great colors and i like the no outline, makes it stand out like crazy. the face doesn't really fit it but it still looks good on it's own.
     
  8. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    Very nice, just make the O a bit smaller. [/b][/quote]
    i agree, if the 'o' was a bit more narrow and less fat it would pull it together. look's great though dude, very nice.
     
  9. nickstix

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  10. ASB_ONE

    ASB_ONE Senior Member

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    the a looks rele weird, it dosnt stay the same thickness, i duno try n 'squash' the letters in aswell for a throwie but i mean thats just how i like em.

    yo smith i took ur advice was some gd crit

    peace

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  11. uhhh

    uhhh Elite Member

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    that was obviously done on a computer.
     
  12. wood

    wood Member

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    that trash piece has to be photoshopped
     
  13. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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  14. glass

    glass Senior Member

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    good idea, try working on the lettering more. make them seem like they are part of the same style.
     
  15. Proper

    Proper Elite Member

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  16. Loz emlintio

    Loz emlintio Senior Member

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    That's some pretty tight art goin on with the 3D colouring. I like the lettering.
    THe colour contrast is pretty tight aswell. shame about the black bit underneath.
     
  17. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    hahahaha :lol: looks like it was done on a computer? it CLEARLY was, just to let all of you know, ut noenthless you have a good grasp of 3D, and excellent one actually, just keep going at those letters, shits fresh and lose the face

    Peace
     
  18. krazzie_ammo

    krazzie_ammo Senior Member

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    TRASH - i recently got photoshop :) how do you fill with photoshop?
     
  19. ThickGravy

    ThickGravy Senior Member

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    Loving your handstyle for your tag.
     
  20. afek

    afek Elite Member

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    thanx for all the crits most ive ever gotten