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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. nemzone

    nemzone Elite Member

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    ras - naw wasnt keen on the letters, some phat simples would of been nice tho. did u see my post a few days ago showin the progress simples gave me?? trust me ma simple r ur way forward

    ohm, the 3d is too tall, and im not likin the letters sorry.

    g- wahl, its aiight, keep tweaking it slightly then u can go try paint it.
     
  2. shamee1991

    shamee1991 Elite Member

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  3. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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    Thanks Nemz ;)

    Shamee, What about them has to be fixed? To much? Not straight?
     
  4. enMy

    enMy Member

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    aight im like band spanking new to graff and i need some work i know.

    crits

    ai47.photobucket.com_albums_f182_Deadinc91_untitled.jpg
     
  5. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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    First off, loose the crown. A crown is for Kings..

    You need to work on your 3D, the bottom of the L is messed up bad.
    Loose the little extensions on the L and E
    Start with simples
    Everyone on this site is going to tell you to start going simplier.
     
  6. Cy-anide

    Cy-anide Senior Member

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    ok i went as simple as i could i did CY as suggested keyboard type letter font. i wasnt sure about adding colour but if any one has any suggestions let me kno

    ai2.photobucket.com_albums_y11_CyberAssassin_CYsimple.jpg
     
  7. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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    It looks weird at the top of the C and top of the Y where they meet.
    Almost like the Y is behind the C
     
  8. Cy-anide

    Cy-anide Senior Member

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    yea i kno :angry: , do u have any suggestions on how i can fix that?
     
  9. Lunatic

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  10. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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    Either space them out or bring them closer.
    If you space them out..Im sure you can figure that out haha
    And if you bring them in closer, have the C overlap the Y, so you cant see a little top part of the Y
     
  11. nemzone

    nemzone Elite Member

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    lunatic GO FUCKIN SIMPLE!!!!! how many fuckin times!!

    and cyanide, make em closer together
     
  12. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Lunatic- do simples.
     
  13. Cy-anide

    Cy-anide Senior Member

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    alright thanks im working on a new one i changed my C a lil to a more roundish C now to work on the Y :blink:
     
  14. G - Wahl

    G - Wahl Elite Member

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    Spire - The S looks like a C, make the bottom part bigger. The base of the P is to long. The dot on the I is to big. The R is kinda messed up
    But was that done in only pen? No pencil outline? If so, its got spunk ;)
     
  15. Lunatic

    Lunatic Senior Member

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    yeah it was just in pen.. i dont use pencil then go over it with a pen.. i was just playing around and a pen was all i had ive been doing simpler ones i was just messing around with this one
     
  16. ras

    ras Banned

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    yo..thanks for the advice nemz.....ima take yah advice and do simples for a bit untill i feel iv done summet good then post sum shit up when iv got better...

    thanks...
     
  17. G - Wahl

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  18. Cy-anide

    Cy-anide Senior Member

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    alright i brought them closer together ...

    ai2.photobucket.com_albums_y11_CyberAssassin_CYsimpleclose.jpg
     
  19. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    Cy-anide looks good, anyways didn't get many crits on this one any more?
     
  20. Cy-anide

    Cy-anide Senior Member

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    thanks

    i like that one better than ur last