ras i aint tryin to piss u off man, just lettin ya no n u didnt seem to listen. but keep postin so we can tell u if ur simple enuf and help u out
CY - its great but simple so hard to crit. which means its good! heres an exchange i did, says NAP, [Broken External Image]:http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/8163/82si2.jpg crits?
[Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/8769/1202044jn0.jpg im def a lil rusty . . . the right half of the R and lower left handy came out ok cyanide - gettin the letters to sit next to and interact with each other nicely is how you get flow . . . its like a jig saw puzzle and you gotta fit one letter with its own space needs next to another . .with the first CY there was alot of open space in the middle inbetween the 2 letters and it was clumped up top so you did what you have to do . . .look at it, figure out how to work more of the 2 letters into the open space, this time all you had to do was drop the V connection of the Y down . . problem solved . .
oh baby, come to papa! thanks, its given me alot of help on me tags. i can see how you got rid of the negative space etc. mind if i copy that ish?
i love it, except for the 'a' looks like it doesn't fit to me for some reason. i don't know what but i don't like it as much as the rest.
i really like this one the 3rd one catches my eye the most pretty creative i say , and i like the color used. o yea and thanks for the feedback before
its kool man...ill post sum decent shit up soon...i just wnah get letter structure conquered... once i do that..i can go more " complex " lol
i love it, except for the 'a' looks like it doesn't fit to me for some reason. i don't know what but i don't like it as much as the rest. [/b][/quote] sky5?
yeah yar im as confused as you are...i mean...it looks like syks style, but not as good for some reason....but um, thanks for the "bawk" earlier, who are you though? cy, go back to the second CY simple you did, im warning you though, i dont know about anyone else here but i think Y is like the worst letter you can graff lol
yea i agree with that thats y my stuff is shitty its hard to flow with a y . thats y my tag looks shitty as well lol :lol:
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sky i really like your stuff before its erased, it looks sooo crazy. jerm-theres no way thats not sky.
FOUND MY CAMERA havent been sketching much lately, so these are old, but still up to date, if u know what i mean. there all mad fast sketches, but the truth is when i spend my time on it, it never comes out much better if at all. all pen so first, heres my normal handwriting, ive worked on it alot, and im rather proud, crits on it too please! lol fucking around on the train fucking around during class u saw the top one b4 but the bottom quickie u didnt finally, my friend SECA's throw n tag. STREAK - do block letters CRAZE- i love those. dope. u have mad nice simples. pick a nice one, focus on it, and get good. SKY 5-i know its u . . . lol. dunno what to say but that its dope. would you be so kind as to give me some advice? and, i want to ask you a kind of big favor, sketching wise, not my name or nething retarded like that. . . should i pm u? dont wanna fill up space here. thanks. the end. crits please. peace EDIT - forgot one still all pen but this time i tried not to use the "guidelines"
it looks like your on teh verge of gettting really good, just need to work on spacing within eath latter, ecspecially the r, and about spending time, id like to just see a sketch in pencil, erase all the parts that arent needed and then, if your feeling ecspecially nice... outline it.
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