some stuff recently only just got round to scanning it all [Broken External Image]:http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/5352/olderishkc4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/649/sear4jo5.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/8849/sear2cr6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/589/searrazeur9.jpg not finished yet [Broken External Image]:http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/3656/straightqx5.jpg fucked the r on the straight letter [Broken External Image]:http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/2788/orangepq7.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/7206/acidtr4.jpg crits
sear, do different letters the're all the same in every single sketch ras youve improved A LOT, seriously the E and T are hot as fuck, really just fix the a and c and your good to go Nero i like that e but it looks kinda like wiggles or some other shit
i feel like a dick cuz i seem to be the only 1 who aint feelin ras's letters [Broken External Image]:http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/3718/imag00021xp8.jpg started whilst stoned, finished once i was 2 stoned to continue lol
socrates...thanks man...i really hope i had improved and you , such a good writer saying i have is great...and your style is dope as always nemz...i didnt really expect you to like my stuff...as you never do.. <_< .. i dunno why lol... anyway its your opinion and i understand that...im liking the chrome one...great effect...but un the second one...i dont like how the E drapes down to the M krazzie...its okay man...i did it with in the first 3 hours of u asking lol..and im looking forwad to seeing you stlye in my name... just got sum new steadtler triplus fibre tips...hopin to do sum good stuff with um...
Giving shit critism wont make any one better. All this "yeah, its dope, add a back ground", is bullshit advice
[Broken External Image]:http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/1740/00022pn2.jpg cleaning it up as you look, but critz on my structure...no more markers Nemz im feeling the First one pretty good but the right part of the N could be pushed in a little and the Top right part of the M looks a lil to big. And the last one I'm not feeling how the middle part of the E is going into the M just looks odd. But yea that chrome effect thing is tight.
nahnemz, thats me as well, i think ras that i just cant like give you crits because your eltters progress so slolwy, but you do like thousands of sketches, so in all honesty, it gets annoying seeing the exact stuff over and over again, i dunno, but whatver, keep pluggin away i guess, but maybe only post stuff when you're really happy with it I havent been on here in a minute, but i see all these talks of BSC exchanges and theres no way i can do like 7 exchnages, so i say we have a 3 on 3 battle or something instead, holiday themed, i dont know how wed pick fair teams and such though and nemz i love that top pencil one, espcially the E Peace
Poopis...i like that throw... dus this show my progression... View attachment 237324 to this i just did.. View attachment 237325 crits please ! thanks
the second one is Hot but on the first one it looks a little tooo sharp, also skinny I dunno what the fifth or fourth letter says too scrunched up for my likings but um that first one could use a little more time into it. Also work on your 3d alittle bit more.
lol...the first one was showing my progression ..i did that about 4 months ago...and the 2nd one i did last night
jesus, would you guys just READ the posts, you dont even have to read every single one, but if your looking at a post ith a flick, and someone says bump, i really liked this so and so, that would mean, its NOT theres so dont say "thats hot man!" or when someone says "my letter progression" dont give them crits on how to make the old one btter. if your gonna take the time to hit the reply button, at least READ the post your talking about :wacko: Fosale-i kinda like it, pen freestyles kinda bug me but thats not too bad, just keep working on it. tricks-thats a good idea on the exchanges, i already did one, well two, for bouncing soul but they were just outlined, about picking teams.. i think you and and baper, or whatever he writes now, should be captains, because in my view you two are the best of the club, and then pick people to be on your team..? otherwise it'll be too uneven.
Post this again...it got confused up with that old shit... View attachment 237337 proper crits now lol...thanks !
Ahhhh, the battle thing sounds sweeet... Wouldn't we need a photoshop guy on each team though? Or probably someone could just do a really basic one so they'd all be in in the same flick because the main focus wouldn't be the background but the actual sketches... ...And I forgot the list :edit: Oh yeah, nemz, you're not alone on your opinion on ras... Just had to say that
your on your way. i really wish you just do your stuff without weird endings and all. i think it actually be nice to look at then. whats with the a's in every letter? :huh: bouncingsoul-i have photoshop, i am NOThING special, at all with it, but i can put them on a background.. but thats about it. itd be nice if we could wait til winter break (starts 20th..?) because i have ten pages to write and two other projects to do before then...