nice karak...but the squiggly lines at the side are pointless...or if thats graffiti...if it is i would recommend simpler letters...

 

Sear: I love the fill on the blue one
Milik: Are those letters or squigles but nice character
emokid:i would fix the "a" but other wise i love the 3d and how it fades to black

 

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working on a piece just crits on the 'S' thnks

 

Lovin it man. Put that on a wall asap...

 

^^ i dont like the W..

nero...looks okay...just maybe to many tiny addons for my likeing

changed up my A...i know the right leg is a bit skinnier than the other...

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..Crits.. :blink:

 

thought u werent gunna post til u had a breakthru? stil same old unproportioned letters

 

yea i still don't really like ur letters ras jus not my style, they're decent tho.

 

ras, separate your letters, right now your joining them by having them overlap each other, as if your trying to prodoce some sort of cloud effect

just, damn son i dunno, go simpler, please ?

 

:blink: :blink: :blink: :blink: uh.. :blink: :huh: ..i forgot bout that...and BS still confuzes me.." i dont like your letters...still theyre decent tho " ... " same of unproportianed letters " .. aah..i dunno..who shall i listen to... :unsure: ... i might just not post any more flicks here...untill i get better..or just post flicks without asking for comments like necro sed..u dont really need a internet forum

cloud effect..hmmm... <_< :blink: :unsure:

 

ras, dont combine ur letters, by combining the a and the t it kind of makes it look like an N , am i the only one that sees this?

i like your style though just dont combine letters it'll look so much cleaner.

 

oooh yeah lol...thanks for pointing some thing contructive out ... :blink:

 

yes cept the s is bigger than other letters

 

ras what i have been tellin u is constructive. it will help u more than continuing with that and passing it off as my own opinion. the majority of writers who actually paint will agree i think ul find. ur choice buddy, ive sed b4 i wasnt gonna help again, but just listen and you will improve.

 

amen^

 

fixed the image look a couple posts down...

 

cant see it ^^

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sez delt

dno if i like it or not

coloured in photoshop was originaly coloured by pen bt was a bit sketchy so meh

feedback

 

that does not say delt^...it just..it cant..

i can see the L, and like 3 circles for an E? i dontt man im not really feeling it, i suggest going back to simples, and then maybe trying something with lots of circles later, could devlop into an interesting style

 

there is no way that says delt, if it does my granmother is a cowboy

 

i see it the first d is lowercase...so yes your grandmother is a cowboy
if you know what plan b skateboards are thats what he based it of of or atleast i think