Maybe some crits right hurrr.

 

thanks for the inspiration to get better...

 

fixion get a bigger pic but it looks aiight. lose the hole that looks like a nose. a straight line would look better i think.

yank i swear ive seen those all b4 the throws Y n A have mad thin strokes n then the N and K are mad fat. keep it consistant. the piece is nice, but lose the fill.



can a baby sitter get a single crit on his wack throw? b4 i post up another?



SAKE- for inspiration, go to the big boys n look around. for facts, come here n ask for crits. ur at a graffiti forum. deal with it.

 

Ha, that's all the advice I got when I posted this



But look again, I edited it

:edit: alive, I gave you critz... Now take em and run away with em

 

forgive me bounce. u posted 3 times after i did, and i cant tell which if talking to me.


woah. whens that shit from. lol.

waste of a postttttttt. ill get some new pics and do an edit.

 

It's got the date hahahaha 3/06

Here's some more, I was snooping around on my old 12oz account and found em haha, I sucked so bad... I listened to shitty music and was really childish back then apparently too... I changed a lot in 6 months





:edit: Some more








^Ha, I soooo bit that last one

 

haha actually its not nearly the worst around here. but the handstlye is really poor. i swear everyone EVERYONE starts with the same handstyle. normal cap letters but they just make everything a hard angle. u know? lol.

but u nvr answered my question :sob:

 

yeaa.. ive been around here for quite some time. id say about a year. just i stopped writin after 2 months and i jus started last week thats my first shit that ig ot after bein back. but i dropped that name because of the huge sake. im now skarz/skars or skar. sounds corny but this time imma jus use pen nnd paper and just work and work. ill have some more shti soon. thx

btw bouncing, u do not, i repeat, do not want to see the first shit i ever did. you wont have eyes any more. lol

 

I think I did...? All of em from early this year

 

awwww i hate to take up this much space to keep talking abt this. but i gotta. lol i promise to post tons of pics n crits later to make up for it. i was wondering which crit was directed toward me from the last page, cuz i couldnt tell, n u said one was. lol

 

There ya go... Bump this as well haha

 

haha ok then. any suggestions abt the squareness of the A?

those throws are illl. i think if u worked on making them all the same size though, in the end it would look better, even though temporarily u might lose some style.

 

Playin with extensions.
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crits and pointers

 

^^^ you needa start playing with simples. i wish i could say anything good bout em but i dont find those good at all. letter structure, extensions, color choices, fill...all need work. try using complimentary colors for the outlines so the peice pops a little.

 

the O in the second one is actually kinda alright, its got a nice mechanical feel to it

but, for starters, lose the colour, seconodly, dont play with addons, try to work out some sort of simple mechanical machinery style, might be cool

done

 

yeah i really like the o in the second one but all the other letters pretty much suck. try some simples like everyone else has or is about to say.

after talking to a local wrtier today i decided to switch up my name.

 

to tell you the truth i'm not really feeling the new name. i honestly like poed way more. duper just sounds kinda corny. i'm def feeling the simples tho.

anyways here's the throwy i've been working on. crits please.
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ps...ignore the whack handstyle at the bottom. and i know the drop shadow is a little fucked up. o ya it reads amens. peace.

 

buuummppp.

this shit it hootttt :lol: :lol: :lol:

im gonna go dig through my room and find some old pieces

 

damn.

musta thrown em away.