bump cuz im fat and greedy uhhhhh: thanks bruh, i get bored of stuff mad easily and i dont write baper or move kilos ha. so i changed it
dont overlap that much, make the letters more solid than wavy, get rid of that hideous p. the letters need structure theyre a little sloppy work on the dropshadow
thanks albert , im thinking of dropping that whole indent thing at the top, ill def take use what you said
,mmmmmmmm i like it albert, nice work on that thro enuf, it looks nice, real clean, the letters cud do with sum work scope go simpler, start from some simple letters, get them down, then develop them from there.
enuf, really like the e, maybe try a lower case n, get rid of the arrow in the u, and dont disconnect the second arm of the f. add some funky colors and a nice forcefield and you got a fresh piece on your hands. btw thanks truth
only hot one outta the batch u posteed. this 1liner is hotter than any of the other tosses youve done. work with this.
View attachment 240505 ^^^ damn i like this. did this for the heat throw battle that never happend. View attachment 240506
fube, the t is fucking hot. the h is nice but pretty generic, the e's nice as well, but the a doesn't look like an a at all, kinda wrecks it. on your handstyle, the extension things look really nice but the letters themselves need a lot of work. save the addons till you have better letters and it'll be fire.
Vagrent: its just common courtsey to crit the one above u before posting something new. in regaurds to your stuff, your 3d is messed up a bit on the first "rant", and the others with exception of the last are a bit sloppy for my taste. but i can tell your structure gets better as u go along. to me your headed on the right path. just keep going. meetermaid: i can see what your talkin about but maybe the fact that the a is the only lower case letter kinda throws it off? and the handy, my chestel tip marker ran out so i used a sharpie, and i hate it but yeah, im still workin on it. ive been tryin like mad to get some structure to my letters but every time i sit down and actually hit the book, something gos wrong or it does not end up like i want it to. its so fuckin frustrating, for instance, i started this, but then transposed the last letters, its supposed to say "desire". so i just stopped. :angry: View attachment 240511 also the underline on the tag just made it more gay. so i just quit on it.
Poed, that throw is nice but the 'D' looks waaaaaaaaaay too much like an 'O' Yells, hot shit, I like your style. Rant, the last one is the best, some potential in it. Fube, the 'lust and 'love parts are fucking ace, nice and simple but not too simple. The Desire part is nice too, just that the 'd' looks like a 'j' and the 'i' is kinda camoflauged (sp?)/hidden. Surprised how this sketch came out cause I was so tired, I know it need work but CC would be cool. [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/sketch24.jpg
Caset-your throwie came out so clean it almost looks computer generated (if it is then shame shame) but the 3d on the top of the E was off a little heres mine has a little skil zerk oz1 And TBS on it [Broken External Image]:http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r195/schawnell/toybb.jpg
Skil, to much random pointless stuff going on, try just one theme for a backround Caset, your C's 3d is way off, connect the bottom of the A to the C before you do your 3D. Fube, all your letters keep getting taller and taller. And im not really feeling how the S goes over the E Rant, lookin good, try to keep the T behind the N, in my opinion it doesnt look good when you over lap like that..I like the one with the stars, just need to make them all the same size, the A is a bit to skinny and the T is a bit to short