i think if u made the tail of the 2 sorta mirror image the extension of ur f it would flow beter try it
you got that old skool feel down...especially the fill-in of "Duro" on the train. overall its a pretty good sketch, only problems i have with it is that state-looking thing next the last "a" and the uneven marker fill-ins. Good job with the character, nice concept with the "S" too, haha.
bump for ras hah the karak for the s looks like a dj u did for a diff one, the top of the c seems kinda heavy or big , b-boys arm looks like a rifle lol and its hat is a bit thin, and why is the left side of the lil banner like tan but the other is brown?
thanks VERY much for the constrcutive crits peeps.. very much appreicated and its MOSEOOO ! LOL..WUT UP !
[Broken External Image]:http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/38/dsc0448or0.jpg alright just messin' with extensions, arrows etc. please don't flame me for it, just experimenting. crits are welcome as always... ras-like the train and the "C" if you take off the little thing at the bottom, don't like the "a"s at all character's good though... quadratic-looks good, just some of the "E"s like the last one and the top right are hurtin'', don't like the "S"s either. ekers-dope throws fap-pretty good I guess, not diggin' the "A" though
good vibe to the sketch mith but u hidden weak letters behind alot of colour, stay up tho man. sume is dope !!
Same stuff, different classes View attachment 250992 View attachment 250993 :edit: Ignore my shit W in the first one and the second one is REALLY sketchy because I did it while in the dark (we were watching a movie)