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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. HSAL

    HSAL Senior Member

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    bump for crits.
    more crits:

    sleet: fix up the o... doesn't look like an o.
    g.smooth: try a different colour scheme, i can't really see the letters. :/
     
  2. alive

    alive Banned

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    you are not yet at the level where u should be using colors, fills, backgrounds, faces, 3d, any of that shit. u want to be serious, and u want to get serious crits by me, throw all that shit out the fucking window, pick up a pencil and onee black pen, and only work with that. use BARS. damnit.

    focus on the goddamn letters. thats what this shit is about.

    remember, real shit, good shit, can rock hard in black and white with nothing else.




    ras, aimo, w/e the fuck u are now, yeah? well u used to find it pretty goddamn hard. but its all good, just remember your place. like i said, we neevr called u names and all that shit, seriously, if their serious, and your seriously annoyed, say what i had said to u, do what i say or dont, but if u dont, dont come to me and bitch that u still suck.
     
  3. BIGel

    BIGel Elite Member

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    gsmooth-your first and last letters are badly misproportioned, get rid of the color and start from the begininning. take everybody else's advice about simples.

    some-looking good, the s maybe a little off but it looks good. the handie is ill.

    hsal-nice background but look at basic anatomy more for you characs he's lacking structure. his arms and neck look like jello.

    something for that coshure ish. another nemz sketch after i fucked the first one up.
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  4. alive

    alive Banned

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    o fuck that nemz its ill. honestly maybe the best ive ever seen from you. wanna exchange? i write caer, not alive.
     
  5. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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    !!!!^^
    Awesome to the maxX to the exXtreme!

    is that a nemz? it's like hot sauce! on fya!

    can you do me a throw up bigel? do a CY for me!!
     
  6. Kayone707

    Kayone707 Moderator

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  7. mmark187

    mmark187 Member

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    yo south, ill keep off the crowns until im ill. and as for simples, i know what they are and shit, but do i have to use straight lines or is it still considered a simple while working on the flow and shit of each letter. like im not gonna connect them or shit. ill just keep them same size and style, but just wondering about the flow of the letters.
     
  8. TricksForKids

    TricksForKids Elite Member

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    i hate how mathematical youre all making graffiti, its like theres some disgusting formula of straight bars you have to use in order to be "good", theres something called creativity and artisitc talent as well, im a big supporter of starting with simples, but even those can be "your own", so do simple however you want to mark, they can have straight lines or not

    and bigel, exchange with me or die homie

    :D
     
  9. Sumoe

    Sumoe Elite Member

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    dope shit BIGel.
     
  10. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    ^ since no one gave feedback on those (am i heading in the right direction for a throw?)

    and some new stuff:

    bleh, pen freestyle and a "should i finish this or not"

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    bigel -- Eeyore? lol Dig both.

    hsal -- Might want to just focus on your letters like someone else said, save your markers. To each his own though. 2nd page looks sloppy. You trying to go for that ribbon effect in the first one...? Kinda needs more consistency and uhh... like depth or something. I dunno how to explain it.

    sleet -- 3d on the bottom doesn't seem off, it'll gradually look better over time. Just don't forget the 3D on the top of your letters too.
     
  11. Soze One.

    Soze One. Banned

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    bump.
    this shit got ignored my worthless chit chat.

    just so im not flickless.
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  12. <~ReSiN~>

    <~ReSiN~> Senior Member

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  13. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    that CD makes me puke...i like the flow on the RE peice
     
  14. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    emokid -- looks hot. love that shading, you just use a bic pen? I would consider making the "slits" on the tops of the letters a little less deep. (more so the "E" and "A" than the "P" and "R".)

    Soze -- love the "S", like the "E", not feeling the "Z" and "D" (is that a "D"?) so much. should be a little bit more defined, maybe bring the "Z"s top out to the left a bit more.
     
  15. HuntingLOLs

    HuntingLOLs Senior Member

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    there's 2 types of simples - block letters like on your keyboard, and the styled simples. block letters are quite easy to figure. they're made of blocks :p
    the simples with style are the ones you develop while working on block letters (suddenly you by mistake draw a line abit wrong and realize it looks cool or you get a nice idea and try it out). they go hand in hand so work with blocks untill you're certain you can do them in your sleep.

    but remember its not forbidden to experiment (just dont post it here yet). keep having fun with it etc.
     
  16. Ratikoner

    Ratikoner Senior Member

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    i like the letter structure n fills n what not...but im gettin sick of the name resin its... so common/unoriginal...along with many others but yeah i like most of your letters



    p.s.

    ICP got mad gay after the first wraith CD...madd sold out...then they go n sign a redneck artist too? as far back as i can remember they hated rednecks...

    n that slipknot cd is good...i liked it...there newist shit wack...corey shouldnt have let that stonesour shit influence his lyrics on slipknot...its a shame <_<
     
  17. NICCSACC

    NICCSACC Banned

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    dope shit but ICP sucks since ringmaster came out. slipknot is terrible musically.

    im in a death metal band by the way.
     
  18. anie 1

    anie 1 Senior Member

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    nice work but i wasnt crazzy bout first piece but it was still pretty good job
     
  19. Samp1e

    Samp1e Senior Member

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    ^ since no one gave feedback on those (am i heading in the right direction for a throw?)

    and some new stuff:

    bleh, pen freestyle and a "should i finish this or not"

    [Broken External Image]:http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/2460/20070403samp1od0.th.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/446/20070403samppenstylech0.th.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/5391/20070403samp2db3.th.jpg

    bigel -- Eeyore? lol Dig both.

    hsal -- Might want to just focus on your letters like someone else said, save your markers. To each his own though. 2nd page looks sloppy. You trying to go for that ribbon effect in the first one...? Kinda needs more consistency and uhh... like depth or something. I dunno how to explain it.

    sleet -- 3d on the bottom doesn't seem off, it'll gradually look better over time. Just don't forget the 3D on the top of your letters too. [/b][/quote]
    re-re-bump
     
  20. AimoOne

    AimoOne Banned

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    why bump them on the same page you terd