my fault, my post/page display isn't default. thought it was on a different page. I'm just begging for some feedback.
[Broken External Image]:http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/1979/dsc0766tk3.jpg This is gonna be my second battle I ever entered on BS nukkas...not done yet like always, still gotta touch up some shits here and there but you get the gist of it. h34r:
sumoe...that ish is so tight, the only thing i dont like is how the 's' seems to be shorter than everything else. but your not done so i kno your probably already doing something about that. o and i guess your having trouble with the letters in my name for our exchange? sheist...i think your overdoing it with the faces, but thats just my opinon, other than that i think its pretty good. samp1e...your sketches are all pretty good, nice simples. as for the throw i like it but im not so crazy about how its a thin like for the middle of the 's'
thats fire sume. the only crit i have is id make the the A (where its crossed) a straight bar to match the straight horizontal bar on the H. seems like it would make it more symetrical to the eye. nice tho.
something ive been working on. not finished. the pencil sketch looked so much better. vaginal squirt. close up further away
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/2108/blac...ingay010uv7.jpg I was drawin in my black book and this came out :blink: crits?
i understand, i know what its like. ive been so busy i havent had time to sketch in awhile myself, i want to hopefully sketch tonight but i never know if ill have enough time.
[Broken External Image]:http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/840/dsfsdfjm4.jpg Not a Piece. Not a Throw. Hate on it.
Sume that sketch for your battle looks pretty sick but i'd fill in that little area above the S or make the top a little bigger. Sex I like that style but i'd ditch a few of the squiggles here and there, some of the letters like the Q and G. And since my other sketch was ignored through the bickering of like 5 people heres another one I did just now. I only added the arrow because i've never done one and figured why the hell not :lol: [Broken External Image]:http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/3360/img2308mediumvu3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img451.imageshack.us/img451/6687/img2304mediumcq7.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/4713/picture034kc3.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img489.imageshack.us/img489/645/picture035xa1.jpg fosale i hate the q but all the rest is nice cl the letters are too wobbly and wide some your m's are kinda big and the e's bottom leg is long
awesome and unlike the previous poster i actually ENJOY looking at that S in that position. if you color that.... im going to consider retiring from this shit.