S needs work ohter than that looks ight bottom of e a lil 2 skinny i guess ...stay up crots on mine////?

 

Oh shit..Shifted .. your a Veteran.. :blink: :huh:

 

Here's my attempt at a twirly thing... I got inspired to do some twirly cuz I seen one a couple pages ago.

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Cool idea, something feels a little funny about that S though.

 

lol. i dont like the twirly thing, but the throw up is bangin.. but the N is kinda hard to know its an N if u get me.. anyone could think its 2 l's

 

bump for more crits

 

Newby..do blocks
Shifted..do blocks
Cynik..not likin the twirly thing..its unorgiginal..i fraking love the throw
Cokololou...like i said..i dont like the twrily shit

sum shit

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spilt red bull all over the basterd !

 

I am do a twirly style to the maxX! and that will be banging!... some day

I like my throw too! and yeah the N is hard to notice... but oh well... I am cool like that.. haha :lol:

 

wutchagonnado- do blocks...start from simples

 

edit ... no beef ... ill crit you properly ShIfTeD...the flow of the peice is pretty good...its cleaan..i just dont like the structure...although its a fairly good concept...but im not feeling the white line thru it

and Stim..just please..

 

Shut your fucking hole with the beef... What the fuck is wrong with you?

 

he's on tha piff manzz yeroo 4/20 comin woot woot

 

uugh..wha...React..PM me what im getting back for this karak you want me to do..

sorry..if i sounded an ASSSS....i kept getting the MBS bill shit coming up..and it twas seriously annoying.. :angry:

 

shifted dnt do blocks! i think it will kill ur style! erm more trile and error and er plan!

 

Amt I love that pen sketch, I can't get over that style!

Some from today, I'm bad at color schemes.
Exchange with naruto-
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Exchange with fluffybunnies- sorry, I did most of this on the bus so it doesn't look so good
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critss please

 

yeah i know i wasnt planning on it, i was just experimenting with a new style...i didnt feel like doing my 3D style this time

 

AMTWO i like that bad boy oh yeaa
Dizzle D not much to say bout it just keep working on it
Not feelin it shifted

 

hey dizzle thats dope thanks man. My thing for the exchange didnt come out so well so i just pmed it to dizzle :[

 

:lol:
new page, crits please