top one is pretty good, bottom one i dont like so mch, and simples are like block letters, the one krazzie posted isnt that simple, letme find a good simple as an example
here we go these are pretty decent simples, besides the r in the first and the k in the second hope that helped
NEMR - ur shit's weak! Just don't do so many add ons and color it properly, downsize the pic, cuz it's like a fat womans ass in ur face.
panic - if you want some good simples, look at your keyboard and copy those letters. nemr - those arent too bad, you just have a shaky hand, take a bit more time outling it,
nemr, it's actually not all that bad, if i were you though, i wouldn't use highlighters. they smear everything and it ruins a piece. In fact if i were you, i wouldn't color anything unless i could find some decent markers (24prismas go fer about 25$ on ebay. not to shabby.) some of the letters look a little off, but overall you got the right idea it looks like. just practice getting clean lines.
pan1k - if you're serious: they are letters without extensions or weird bends, blockletters/keyboard letters usually, but can be anything, as long as its simple... tezer: the good looks like a wizard hat, do it like a hood instead (they go down instead of up) - drips are usually drawn by gravity so its almost always straight down Krazzie - A is way to big, make it smaller
panik try not to make your letters so ridged and on the "P"s that you were doing i deffinetly like that second one [Broken External Image]:http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/708/untitledqp4.png this was done on paint recently not rele black book but i decided to put it in here ne ways so let me no wat you think
pan1k those are pretty good if you remove the extenting part of the extention it will look better (dotnr emove the upwards flip tho) move the first bar on the n abit closer to the next and make the A alittle bigger and its good
ok that bttr ??? ima darken the rest to so its same level darkness k is ok now? and the A yea ill mess with it more and thnx again for all the help guys
still, look at the bottom of the k, you see the extension, remove the part that sticks out downwards so the becomes a part of the bar that holds it... looking abit better, the a is a bit weird tho, play around with it abit and you'll prolly figure something out
look at all these arrows. god im such a burner;D jk.....this was my first attempt at a wildstyle from way back.
hahah... I had to laugh... but yeah, you will laugh at that when u get better too.. so don't take it the wrong way. I don't even know what u were trying to do, but keep it up, except make it simpler.
I guess youv improved then ..? Panik..i like that bottom simple.. so..Work in progress....a Collab peice with Flufffffaaayy View attachment 269243 Wha..yah think..now fluffy you may have the idea i was talking about