[/b][/quote] Ante, its the same piece...I will next time. That a is horrible because you extended it too far, I think you know that though. Pretty much work on cleanliness...and some bar consistency... yes, I'm bumping again but! I'm adding a new pic...just a generic throwy... Crits?
o tha throwie lukks very nice...not very clean...but nice... hahah mah bad bout gettin on ur ass bout tha E didnt notice it was tha same peice o and i have people that tell me "where have u bin hidin this, this shit is tight!" when i leave tha bars on...when i erase them, whole different story...
Its def. an improvemnt from your old stuff imo and you def. have the idea done, just some bars are too thick or too thin (and not the ones that are supposed to be) other than that (and the a) the letters are nice and simple. And I know simples get boring but they do help...I was thinkin about it, and if your going to do this crazy ass pot with curves and handles (out of clay) dont you at least have to know how to make a pot first? Thats my explanation for why to do simples....but keep it up man. And that throw yeah I was doing it fast like if was teh real thing.
any advice b4 i make this offical?? i think its workin? def improved sinc emy first post in here thnx everone!!!!! zep0 - throwy is nice i like dat
hehe. looky at all my toy talent;] ^ok my first attemp at wildstyle.. along time ago ^forst attempt at a peice. a long time ago. panik- looks nice;]
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Your definatly doing the right thing. Try bringing your letters together and making it look a little less so much like bars bring them closer where they join try rounding edges experimenting with lengths and try curving your "bars" to. do what ever you want try adding something or cleaning it up a little bit and you have a hot simple in my poinion.
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ahhh. the first and last one are extremely nice. i would maybe. just maybe. making the horizantal bar on the e in the last sketch a bit thicker?
damn its true it is toys critin toys we need you mods lol neway sume nah i ahavnt taken any inspiration (hintin that im biting ) from em n i like doin over grown teeth yh i like die59/lust n i like gesus but doesnt meen ima bite em n 666 wannabe nah im 14 lol theyre all like 18 n shit neway yh we need good crits n zepo yh i have to give every letter teeth n shit cos i wnna so once you devolop a style then you can crit evryone until then fuck off n practice
Can someone good show me some really nice simples to give me some ideas so mine dont look so plain.. Resin - NICE STUFF!
panik - heres an example, they are just like simple if you want more, check out all the different fonts on microsoft word. [Broken External Image]:http://img183.imageshack.us/img183/9668/118db6.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/9891/121wo6.jpg some quick stuff crits?
keep up the work panic u went from shit to beta in a few days keep with these n the style n shit will just com to u , use the touch twins now n colour .
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krazzie i think ive seen that music one before. but they are nice simples and the second is pretty sweet. trupe go simple lose all the extensions