hyphy: do something that resembles letters...... nutckstix: youve improve for when u frist came he a lot.... still gotta a long way to go.........u have the idea and if u keep goin on youll keep im provin for now jus do simples and add som 3d
Enigmatic-how is this wack, it's blocks. nickstix- It's good, but theres something about it I don't like. Maybe the played out E or the way the n's middle bar sticks out of the right leg. The T is dope tho. Popshots- I don't like the way your letters are kinda made out of eachother if you know what I mean, but the overall style is nice. I couldn't read the bottom one at first. colored View attachment 270447 shaolin View attachment 270448
yea i frogot to ask for crits so bump for crits...... krazzie: i wanna see it when its colerd..... g smooth: dont color your ish yet work on them letters torrent: the bigger throwie is decent pupel pants: STRAIT LETTAS writer45: your handstyle is strait up WACK...... go way way simpler on that [/b][/quote] LMAO! thats not my handstyle dude thats some shit i scribbled out
I know, I was just listening to No Cash's "skate or die" so i decided to write it. Just because it was long and i wanted to practice more letters.
agro- yea dude u need to take more time in drawing [Broken External Image]:http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/3974/dankpy4.jpg critiques?
its simple shit man it aint rocket science to rock ok-ish simples wats it say dank or dark, thers ur first problem if theyr simples you shouldnt have a problem being able to tell what the fuck it says. The d is a weird shape the width of your bars varies and makes it look rele toy, the a in lower case dosnt rele work with upper case letters i used to rock my a's like that but keeping the word all one case is the best solution, but again its all disproportionate, the n or the r i duno wat that letter is, is fucd up and just plain wack start over with that letter, the k is alright but it aint got no style to it. wen u do simples try doing a line at the top a line at the bottom and splitting that into boxes the same amount as ther are letters then fill them out wid ur letters accordingly, that should help wid ur proportions