ASB, I haven't seen you in mad long man. Post more, post more! You got hella good My sketch for the first round of the Round Robin "Easy" View attachment 273737
alright then. from now on i write fetus. bouncingsoul - that looks awesome as a whole, but i can't really find the letters. im probably just too toy. but yeah, i like it.
bouncing that is so funky fresh. heres a video i just made... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G5Fo6GT7WTc bad throw but whateva. ummm crits appreciated though. this thread gets replys faster than the paint one.
i want to completely start over as a writer. is this what i should be doing? [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_1911-1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_1913.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/DSC_1912.jpg
you should be trying to construct letters from the basics, yes, but don't do all that random sketchy bullshit. everyone i've ever known that makes lines like that has gotten nowhere with it. what you should do is try to make lines as complete as possible, you'll end up getting the sketchieness look from over lapping lines that you didn't bother to erase. Also start using bars. looks like you used 'em for the first two, but not the third.
heres somethin i did.... ive only bben taggin for about a mnth..... small camera but i couldnt get better pics...sorry..lol View attachment 273753 View attachment 273754 View attachment 273755 View attachment 273756 plz comment.. and yea its 2 pgs..jus needs coloring plz comment and crit
^^^ do simples and stop with invader zim. It's a damn good show, but it's like... mainstream counterculture. every 14 year old goth/scene wannabe anywhere knows that show inside and out. it's played.
EXPERIMENTAL. probably shitty. [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/fetus4.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i95.photobucket.com/albums/l145/mblavis777/fetus5.jpg
wow bouncingsouls, dope to open up the page to that, good work man fetus- the clue outlined one looks good. use basics slant them and stuff then move on, just keep doing simples then move on when you feel you can construct a good letter over and over again wow imageshack is slow, or maybe its just my shitty computer, anyways heres a lil mess about throw you can onely see a bit, just to make this post worthwille, crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/8440/skitripjz6.jpg
Hey what up everyone im new to this forum and well I started like 2yrs ago well not really I got more into to it like 1-2months ago I finnally found a name lol changed a couple of times just tell me what u think i know iits garbage compared to what some of u do but i think im some what getting better and i wana know what should i work on and I suck in choosing colors lol Well here it is lol Caution: Eye's might burn lololol [Broken External Image]:http://img514.imageshack.us/img514/3773/synnewtryzg1.jpg latest sketch [Broken External Image]:http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/8333/syntry2py2.jpg
yo can i catch some more feedback on this? syn peeps will be tellin you to try simple letters like the second one keep at it wid that style.
[Broken External Image]:http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/5269/1024zh1.jpg somthing missing on bottom of L i dnt know wat and i only finished this cos i was asked 2
guest thats dope man you improved majorly, the extension on the bottom of the S i think should be lost it will make the peice look more level, i dunno maybe also take out the curly part on the extension of the bottom of the G, looks wiedrd cuz its the only part that is swirly, overall that shit is dope man , props