How does this look and what should i try?

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i normaly wouldnt crit u, u gotta crit if u wants sum but.. its better, just practice the basics

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try making the letters a little thicker and also try rounding them out a bit then just try different ways to make ur letters fit together until you get what you want



some new letters ive been trying out so i did some quick throwies for my homies sars and pye

 

thick like this ?

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sketch - I hope many toys can use my two steps to....GET IN THEIR THICK HEAD THAT BARS ARE THE WAY FORWARD!!!!!!!! not i say BARS not SIMPLES because simples suck, bars help you get better. Any fool can draw simples, hell i could draw SIMPLES when i was 6.....so yeah any toys lookin' to get good, follow my two steps.

syn - Nooooo, or is it yes? i dont know but keep at it, although you didnt do my first step **tuts**

 

exacally like that just kinda make ur "s" a little bit more proportionate to the rest of ur letters

 

RIGHT...IV HAD A FUCKING NUFF OF THIS SHIT...

SKETCH POSTED HIS PIC...GAVE CRITS...AND DID HE GET THEM BACK...NO...DID HE FUCK...WHO REMEBERS WHEN EVERYONE IN HERE GAVE CRITS...TO FUCKING GET THEM...I CERTAINLY DO....NOW

THIS IS A OLD RULE..


TO GET FUCKING CRITS....GIVE THEM...OR ELSE...YOU WONT GET THEM....I WISH I WAS A FUCKING MOD

 

**whispers to sketch**

i think it might be that time of the month

 

if u here to see progression, why are you posting ur work up, i hate sounding like a lil bitch over the internet but it gets anoying when you get pages and pages of toys posting stuff they shouldnt, not helping each other or any one els, not a personal attack i just miss the good old days


## whispers to revolt, its been THAT time for fucking ages,

 

well even tho u didnt ask for em im gunna crit u, u need to use bars to form ur letters. cuss right now there balls

 

no sketches in last 10 posts

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i think i went overboard.
crits?

 

Is Scam taken?


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yes yes it is taken

 

bump again no crits

 

oprah, its rare when u find a name that isnt taken, just think really hard to come up with sumthin thats really individual

 

yo kraze im liking your new style man kinda fresh, although i have trouble finding the letters, sorry i didnt reply to your pm i had mad work on but yeh im def up for an exchange du write ready now?

yo everyone shutup serious if u wana chat like that theres a thred for it, toy chat.

 

bump again no crits [/b][/quote]
seriously give me some fucking crits

 

Tell me what u think , I tryed placing the letters closer

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ah complete dejavu(sp?) wehn i fisrt posted this and asked for crits, syn posted after me and asked for crits with out giving them out, now hes done it again even after i told him how things are done.. are retarded or just an asshole?